General Opal

Opal was a fine young woman,
Woke up with the sun,
Everywhere she walked were rainbows,
So, she held a gun.

She was tall and she was strict,
And we did all that she said--
Not because we feared her--
But feared that’d make us rebels, instead.

She was free and she was brave,
And she fought for liberty;
Strapping on her rebel boots,
“Are you ready?” She asked me.

She marched down at Times Square,
All alone-- “...Wait, where--?”

As she carried through,
Oxisol raised his dark revolver,
And shot Opal at 5th avenue.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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September 27, 2025 at 6:31 AM
I had to look up general opal and oxisol, I am now pleasantly buried beneath the layers of this deeply symbolic expertly crafted poem. xomo
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