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Gemini Garden, Silent One Poetry Contest

sponsored by: Ink Empress

Date: 25-06-2024

Gemini Garden, Silent One

2nd place


“birds care not for whom they sing” – Silent One


The Sun cares not for whom it rises;
Wind cares not for whom it blows!
Stars care not for whom they shine;
Rivers care not for whom they flow!
Trees care not for whom they bear fruit;
Flowers care not for whom they bloom!		
In giving alone, they find their pleasure;
Our wisdom lies in enjoying them at leisure!	
While giving birth to their children, 
Do mothers expect anything in return? 
Do agreements and contracts hold good,
For performing our duties naturally well?
Doing things and expecting something 
from others, lands you in big trouble! 
Expectations, like mirages, are illusions;
The harder you try to reach them,
The longer they move away from you!!
To be free from the bondage of karma, 
Act without desire for the fruits of action!
This is what every religion does tell us!!
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July 3, 2024 at 1:54 PM
If only one can be free from the bondage of karma.. Interesting take on the contest.. Thanks for writing and congratulations on your placement..
Empress Avatar
July 2, 2024 at 11:31 AM
So much wisdom youve delivered through this profound write! Impressive, and seamless flow too. I absolutely love how your lines go so well with the quote youve used and also the ending! So true , expectations, like mirages are illusions and every religion teaches us, the same principles etc! I loved this! And its a much needed reminder for all! Congratulations on your win
Rodrigues Avatar
July 2, 2024 at 9:38 AM
Back with congrats, dear poet!
Rodrigues Avatar
June 24, 2024 at 6:12 PM
Expectations can ruin relationships. We can set boundaries. Good one, Srinivas!
Veepuri Avatar
July 2, 2024 at 12:48 AM
Kim, thank you. I'm glad you liked it.
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