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Gemini Garden, Silent One

“We are all petals of imperfection sharing the same sun.” - Silent One No one is flawless, So there’s no need to be cheerless, Our petals may not align, They’re still nature’s design. We’re under the same sun, Until we’re gone, Until we become yesterday, So let hope fill today. Let love find a home in us, As we embark on the dawn bus, Today will bring light when we walk out of yesterday’s night. Look into the mirror of freedom, Embrace the ornate celestial kingdom, Imperfection is our bane, Hope keeps our feet on the optimistic lane. June 24, 2024.

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Date: 7/3/2024 2:03:00 PM
Nicely done.. Thanks for writing and congratulations on your placement..
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Date: 7/5/2024 8:49:00 AM
Thank you, Silent One. It's an honour to use your quote as a basis for a poem. I also wrote another poem for a different site using one of your quotes.
Date: 7/2/2024 11:41:00 AM
Dear emate, such truth and wisdom flowing just effortlessly throughout this poem. Love the way youv interpreted the quote. And i love how youv written “ Let love find a home in us, As we embark on the dawn bus, Today will bring light when we walk out of yesterday’s night.” love, is the way, to find light as we walk out of yesterdays darkness! Yes all have flaws, we must learn to embrace it.Brilliant! Congratulations on your win. Thank you for writing and for sharing this
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Thompson Emate
Date: 7/5/2024 8:47:00 AM
Thank you, Ink. I'm deeply honoured.
Date: 7/2/2024 9:41:00 AM
You have a lovely way with words, Thompson! Congratulations!
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Thompson Emate
Date: 7/5/2024 8:44:00 AM
Thank you, Kim. I'm honoured.
Date: 6/23/2024 11:52:00 PM
Lovely. God bless you always, much love, Gina
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Thompson Emate
Date: 6/24/2024 9:54:00 PM
Thank you, Gina, for stopping by. Blessings.

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