Gemini Garden, Silent One

“We are all petals of imperfection sharing the same sun” - Silent One


Let’s state in plain words, who we really are,
which most certainly is not the body-mind.
Floating rudderlessly, we’ve drifted afar
because head and heart are not with love aligned.
In truth we’re living light, shining like a star,
known not because we are gripped in ego’s bind.
Be this as it may, the map’s not the terrain,
so how may we by touch, this wisdom ingrain?

God’s grace both immediate and intimate,
is ever present if we choose to receive,
for which we must ensure desires do not bait.
In staid silence, soul asks ego to beg leave,
upon which we find ourselves at heaven’s gate
and then there remains no load we need to heave.
The false falls away, delusion disappears,
then in the vibrant bardo, God’s light appears!
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July 3, 2024 at 1:56 PM
As always a spiritual element to your poem... I like the word pairing of vibrant bardo.... Thanks for writing and congratulations on your placement..
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July 2, 2024 at 11:37 AM
Dear seeker, you always do these forms so well and leave me in awe, of how profound and powerful your words sound and how it leaves a very uplifting and inspiring impression. I also love the seamless alliterations here, especially love the lines “ In staid silence, soul asks ego to beg leave, upon which we find ourselves at heaven’s gate and then there remains no load we need to heave” i have hope that oneday we will live in a realm that embraces and sees the divine light. Congratulations
Seeker Avatar
July 2, 2024 at 6:05 PM
Thank you, IE dear. We already are that which we seek. The blockages is ego (identity). Once it recedes, we directly see our true eternal Self unmistakably.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 2, 2024 at 9:40 AM
Love the finale of the last two lines! Congrats!
Seeker Avatar
July 2, 2024 at 9:57 AM
Ah, the finale is possible only because of the background that leads to it :)
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July 2, 2024 at 9:19 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your write for Silent One's Birthday.   Have a great day writing away...............
Seeker Avatar
July 2, 2024 at 9:56 AM
Thank you, Paula
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