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Gemini

There is no completeness. Just a conjoined two-parter, both morose and merry, poured in equal measure. Doubled and divided. A personality duel both losing and winning. Enjoyed and loathed the same. The stars eke this chasm, disabling self-belief, turning my happy soul toward the drear darkness.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/26/2014 11:15:00 AM
You have well-portrayed the dual nature of a Geminian. I know, because, I am one.
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Kaye Locke
Date: 9/2/2014 9:49:00 AM
Me too Abdul. Born at the end of May!
Date: 8/25/2014 1:51:00 AM
A good write on Gemini if have well placed Saturn, Kaye. congrats.
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Kaye Locke
Date: 9/2/2014 9:49:00 AM
Thanks Ram x
Date: 8/24/2014 11:36:00 AM
- Hey Kaye, congratulations on your 2nd place in the contest: Zodiac Sign, sponsored by: Leonora Galinta - A very well written poem! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Kaye Locke
Date: 9/2/2014 9:48:00 AM
Thanks so much Anne Lise. Glad you liked it! x
Date: 8/24/2014 10:26:00 AM
A very beautiful poem on zodiac sign you’ve penned my dear poet friend,Kaye! I enjoyed thoroughly the read. Congratulations on your great win! So much thanks as well for your loving support. Biggest hugs and cheers! Love lots always, Leonora
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Kaye Locke
Date: 9/2/2014 9:48:00 AM
Thank you Leonora. I was quite chuffed with the result! x
Date: 8/24/2014 10:14:00 AM
Kaye, congratulations on a wonderful win! Excellent write for a well-deserved placement! Pandita
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Kaye Locke
Date: 9/2/2014 9:47:00 AM
Thanks so much Pandita x
Date: 7/16/2014 2:14:00 PM
Nicely done, Kaye! Good lock in the contest! Hugs.. Arlene
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Kaye Locke
Date: 7/18/2014 4:52:00 AM
Thanks Arlene. Fingers crossed!