Kaye Locke Poet Blank verse

Gemini

There is no completeness.
Just a conjoined two-parter,
both morose and merry,
poured in equal measure.

Doubled and divided.
A personality duel
both losing and winning.
Enjoyed and loathed the same.

The stars eke this chasm,
disabling self-belief,
turning my happy soul
toward the drear darkness.

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Abdul Malik Mandani August 26, 2014 at 11:15 AM You have well-portrayed the dual nature of a Geminian. I know, because, I am one. Kaye Locke September 2, 2014 at 9:49 AM Me too Abdul. Born at the end of May!

Dr.Ram Mehta August 25, 2014 at 1:51 AM A good write on Gemini if have well placed Saturn, Kaye. congrats. Kaye Locke September 2, 2014 at 9:49 AM Thanks Ram x

Anne-Lise Andresen August 24, 2014 at 11:36 AM - Hey Kaye, congratulations on your 2nd place in the contest: Zodiac Sign, sponsored by: Leonora Galinta - A very well written poem! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Kaye Locke September 2, 2014 at 9:48 AM Thanks so much Anne Lise. Glad you liked it! x

Len Gasun August 24, 2014 at 10:26 AM A very beautiful poem on zodiac sign you’ve penned my dear poet friend,Kaye! I enjoyed thoroughly the read. Congratulations on your great win! So much thanks as well for your loving support. Biggest hugs and cheers! Love lots always, Leonora Kaye Locke September 2, 2014 at 9:48 AM Thank you Leonora. I was quite chuffed with the result! x

Pandita Sietesantos August 24, 2014 at 10:14 AM Kaye, congratulations on a wonderful win! Excellent write for a well-deserved placement! Pandita Kaye Locke September 2, 2014 at 9:47 AM Thanks so much Pandita x

Arlene Smith July 16, 2014 at 2:14 PM Nicely done, Kaye! Good lock in the contest! Hugs.. Arlene Kaye Locke July 18, 2014 at 4:52 AM Thanks Arlene. Fingers crossed!