Gemini

Good and bad, large and small
Eternally connected twosomes
Male and female, yin and yang
Inseparable Siamese twins
Night and day, spring and fall
Infinite cosmic tango 

(written for the contest Acrostic Astrology)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Fraser Avatar
May 10, 2009 at 2:45 AM
Just magic, James
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May 10, 2009 at 2:07 AM
Ah, Niels, you have described my Gemini sister so well. It is always an "Infinite cosmic tango" when I'm with her. She can be the most loving and most cruel person at times. "Night and day," I never know which to expect. Twins, indeed. Love your acrostic style! Carolyn
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April 15, 2009 at 10:20 PM
wonderful ------charma
Shahwan Avatar
April 15, 2009 at 6:25 AM
Beautiful. My question: Should the title "Gemini" dwell any line for which the poem is portraying? Otherwise, should the name be "Cosmic Tango" in lieu of "Gemini"..? I like it so much, no loops in it, and it is meaningful. I need to read more about acrostic. All the best.
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