Gemini

Good and bad, large and small Eternally connected twosomes Male and female, yin and yang Inseparable Siamese twins Night and day, spring and fall Infinite cosmic tango (written for the contest Acrostic Astrology)

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James Fraser

Date: 5/10/2009 2:45:00 AM

Just magic, James

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/10/2009 2:07:00 AM

Ah, Niels, you have described my Gemini sister so well. It is always an "Infinite cosmic tango" when I'm with her. She can be the most loving and most cruel person at times. "Night and day," I never know which to expect. Twins, indeed. Love your acrostic style! Carolyn

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/15/2009 10:20:00 PM

wonderful ------charma

Nadia Shahwan

Date: 4/15/2009 6:25:00 AM

Beautiful. My question: Should the title "Gemini" dwell any line for which the poem is portraying? Otherwise, should the name be "Cosmic Tango" in lieu of "Gemini"..? I like it so much, no loops in it, and it is meaningful. I need to read more about acrostic. All the best.