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Gem

I carefully watch him across the room and my eyes reflect the light that shines within him Hanging on his every word, I go into the depths and find that he is true So wonderful, so genuine how could someone just toss him away? What I would give, to keep him to treat him as he really is He is a precious gem a unique treasure I wish to have

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Date: 7/24/2008 11:43:00 AM
Alana, the imagery and choice words allow the reader to understand so clearly the intent. We can see other people, sometimes from failed relationships, and we question why because they seem so perfect and we then desire them, moreso when we can't have them. it always seems to be the wrong time, oh well a subject for another day there LOL Terrific read my friend. Michael
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