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Geese with Moon on Their Wings

Beneath waxing gibbous moon
like a river's flow
geese go gliding gracefully -
on their backs a glow.
As Luna shines on,
their winging is poetry
soaring into dawn.

Copyright © Andrea Dietrich | Year Posted 2025

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Krishnanand Guptar Date: 8/28/2025 12:44:00 PM Congratulations on your top win in this contest with a with a superb flowing poetic piece on the prompt. Wish you a shining day. Login to Reply

Paige Hind Date: 8/19/2025 5:23:00 PM A lovely poem for sure, you did this prompt well, good luck!! :) Login to Reply

Michelle Mac Donald Date: 8/18/2025 11:32:00 AM A beautifully breathtaking poem, Andrea! Certainly a poetic gem :) Hugs, Mikki Login to Reply

CayCay Jennings Date: 8/17/2025 8:42:00 PM Oh, so lusciously beautiful, an absolute poetic thrill to read. I did the kittens, cute but not high-test poetry like this is. There was a time when I knew all the words to that song, but the contest made me realize that's no longer true. Love, CayCay Login to Reply CayCay Jennings Date: 8/18/2025 1:51:00 PM To be honest, of all the choices, it's the one I can't recall from the song. We wonder yet neither has looked it up so we must not wonder enough! CayCay Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/17/2025 9:21:00 PM She doesn't want reference to the song itself. Just how the line makes you feel. I loved this image of the geese and don't even remember. Was that line also in the song??

Paula Goldsmith Date: 8/17/2025 1:25:00 PM I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. You said so much in a few lines. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a fun day and week to come writing away.......... Login to Reply Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/17/2025 9:22:00 PM Will have to see yours

Abdullah Alhemaidy Date: 8/17/2025 1:20:00 PM Beautiful! Login to Reply Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/17/2025 9:22:00 PM Thanks, Abdullah

Joe Dimino Date: 8/17/2025 12:25:00 PM Lovely, really breath-taking. Beautiful write! Login to Reply Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/17/2025 9:22:00 PM Thanks, Joe

Mike Bayles Date: 8/17/2025 9:53:00 AM Wow! So poetic, and a favorite for me. Login to Reply Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/17/2025 9:22:00 PM Thanks a ton!

Sara Kendrick Date: 8/17/2025 4:44:00 AM Ahh!! Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. I enjoyed reading this one. I have often wondered to those geese continue on their journey during the night and if they rest, do they have certain places they always stop to rest up and eat. Thanks for sharing this one with us. soupmail. Sara K Login to Reply