Geese with Moon on Their Wings

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For the 'FAVORITE THINGS' Poetry Contest of Nette Onclaud

Beneath waxing gibbous moon
like a river's flow
geese go gliding gracefully -
on their backs a glow.
As Luna shines on,
their winging is poetry
soaring into dawn.

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/17/2025 1:25:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. You said so much in a few lines. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a fun day and week to come writing away..........

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 8/17/2025 1:20:00 PM

Beautiful!

Joe Dimino

Date: 8/17/2025 12:25:00 PM

Lovely, really breath-taking. Beautiful write!

Mike Bayles

Date: 8/17/2025 9:53:00 AM

Wow! So poetic, and a favorite for me.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/17/2025 4:44:00 AM

Ahh!! Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. I enjoyed reading this one. I have often wondered to those geese continue on their journey during the night and if they rest, do they have certain places they always stop to rest up and eat. Thanks for sharing this one with us. soupmail. Sara K