Sara Kendrick Poet Haiku

Geese Squawking Askew

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                                         Geese squawking askew
                                                         V-formation out of form
                                                                      Headed south too late


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Must be young geese
No strong leader
First flight home
No I will not ask for directions
(Haiku/Free Verse and what else who knows)

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Carrie Richards August 11, 2013 at 6:52 PM I love this progression.....out of sync with the other geese...just as in nature ! Nicely done!

James Fraser January 14, 2011 at 3:08 PM Nice Haiku Sara, there must be some who straggle behind....:)

Robb A. Kopp December 13, 2010 at 7:19 AM luv your sili count

Gerard Keogh Jr. December 11, 2010 at 5:27 PM I give you the top mark for daring and the experiment. I likede it. Regards and thanks from Gerard.

Andrea Dietrich December 10, 2010 at 7:11 PM hahah,a, humorous ones too!!

Sheol Moribund December 10, 2010 at 1:38 PM Dear Sara: Love this poem. The diagram added to the poem's story. Thank you 4 reading and commenting on my poem. Peace: sheol

Wilma Neels December 10, 2010 at 11:02 AM Sara, what a clever haiku, enjoyed tonight.. Hope your weekend will be a good one ;)

Carolyn Devonshire December 10, 2010 at 10:56 AM Smiles, Sara. The leader of this flock must be a guy if he won't ask for directions. Clever poem enhanced by a creative layout!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart December 10, 2010 at 6:55 AM Such a great write this one Sara.. the V formation with no strong leader.. how interesting the concept of this piece... enjoyed the view today with luv... SOUP MAIL...