Geese

Geese
Walking on treadmill
looking out window toward
river watching geese
enjoying beauty of these
creatures strutting by

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James Edward Lee Sr.

Date: 8/22/2018 2:13:00 PM

Lovely write geese are one birds that are over looked, pretty birds..Write on James =D

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/12/2018 8:37:00 AM

A cute one.

Bonnie House
Date: 7/12/2018 4:42:00 PM

Thank you.

Old Buck

Date: 7/11/2018 11:31:00 AM

Bonnie: You silly goose, you should have been outside strutting with those you admired. Keep them coming and sharing them with all of us on the soup. oldbuck

Bonnie House
Date: 7/12/2018 4:46:00 PM

I should have been out there but I was inside doing my treadmill walking instead. They are smart geese as outside the gym building is a driving ranch for golfers. Most of the golfers don't get they golf balls as far out as the geese so this is good for the geese not so for the golfers.

Solomon Ochwo-Oburu

Date: 7/6/2018 9:00:00 AM

I cannot miss reading another poem from you. Interesting imagination. Thanks Bonnie.

Bonnie House
Date: 7/6/2018 4:53:00 PM

I am thinking about doing my treadmill one over. To me it just doesn't flow the way I wanted it to.

Mark Toney

Date: 7/5/2018 2:26:00 PM

Bonnie, I enjoyed your treadmill theater Tanka :) It gave me goose bumps!

Bonnie House
Date: 7/5/2018 10:11:00 PM

I am happy that you liked my poem.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/4/2018 5:41:00 PM

Hello Bonnie welcome to poetry Soup. I hope to see more poetry from your site.I like watching the geese fly over the houses honking as they go by. The geese are beautiful birds and so are the Doves. have a nice evenin my friend.

Bonnie House
Date: 7/4/2018 7:13:00 PM

Thank you for reading my poem. I am just amazed at how many poets and poems there are. Looking forward to reading and writing more. Bonnie

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