G'Day

  G'DAY  

Al oh!  Yes, That's me.  .
Come on man, share with others your
Reason for wanting to be on this team
Oh! I guess I love rhyme and metre and as for
Syllables, I love to count 'em. Haiku and stuff
That's it in a nutshell – what's that you say. Did
I, Al, a neophyte, inadvertently write an Acrostic 
poem.
Crazy! Man. Just crazy!

humoracrostic

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akira artlyy

September 10, 2026 at 9:13 AM

I've really been enjoying your poem and the emotions and imagery were so vivid that i could easily picture them as beautiful illustration. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist, and I'd love to help bring your story to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at gm@il : akiracomicart2@ or on inst@ akiraa_artly

Beata Agustin

February 17, 2024 at 3:46 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.xmm

Skat A

April 19, 2016 at 11:52 PM

Al McCartan, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Moon Flower

April 17, 2016 at 9:43 PM

That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Al. :)

Manmath Dalei

April 17, 2016 at 12:51 AM

Hi AM, Nice first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Wish u a successful journey ahead........hugs

Lindsay Laurie

April 15, 2016 at 6:27 PM

G'day Al ... good to see you hopping on board - Lindsay

Poet Destroyer A

April 15, 2016 at 5:56 PM

Al McCartan, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Poet Destroyer A

April 15, 2016 at 6:32 PM

ha, from where

Poet Destroyer A

April 15, 2016 at 6:32 PM

the UK