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Gazing Galaxies

A dance divine with a celestial convivial chime Gazing galaxies upon a midnight summer's breeze Wormholes waking as the nesting nebulae are baking Star cluster smiles twinkling traverse the many miles Alpha Centauri within gravitational galactic glory Cosmological constellations need no explanations Blusterous Black holes sucking in symmetrical souls Thru the Multi-verse all shall divide and disperse. June.25.2017 LATE JUNE PREMIERE CONTEST - Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Pashang Salehi

Date: 7/6/2017 2:00:00 AM

Very nice my wonderful warrior, every speck of light in your multi-verse is a ball of fire, and our galaxies are in true disarray and chaos, but what a masterful entropy the whole thing is..

Funom Makama

Date: 7/4/2017 8:52:00 AM

Oh my goodness! This is why I always miss your work when I stay away from this site for a while. Your choice of words and perfect blend of a cute message is beyond description. This is definitely good..

Maria Williams

Date: 6/26/2017 7:11:00 AM

A great description of our wonderful Universe WW with a magnificent video clip to go with it - How I love the stars - not the black holes though. Love the poem and made it a FAVE...Maria PS all the best in the contest.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 6/26/2017 1:03:00 AM

Lovely poem with internal rhymes, WW:)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/25/2017 9:33:00 PM

Lovely images! GL!

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/25/2017 6:38:00 PM

Great poem! I like the star cluster smiles twinkling line :)

Jan Allison

Date: 6/25/2017 6:13:00 PM

Brilliant descriptive write ^WW^ our little Island is internationally recognised as a great place for star gazing as we have so little light pollution:-) hugs Jan xx