Gazing

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Gazing over the land the verdant mist of becoming moist with the dew of life glistening in the yellow rose warmth. Gazing over the land golden stalks of being heavy with the fruit of life swaying in the red orange heat. Gazing over the land brown in the existence of past punctured with needles of loss drying as life diminishes. Gazing over the land black from life no longer Slick from the rains of sorrow. Shining as the mirror of future. Gazing over the land the verdant mist of becoming . . . Written: March 2018 Collection: Life

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Muddasar Javad

Date: 12/6/2019 1:56:00 AM

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Caycay Jennings

Date: 12/5/2019 6:01:00 PM

I love the alliteration that accompanies these sumptuous lines of imagery to deliver a mighty fine poem! It delivered feeling, as well - nicely done. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Beto Riginale
Date: 12/5/2019 9:47:00 PM

Thank you Caycay for your comment. The image is of my life on the farm as an allegory for life, amongst other experiences. -beto