Gauche

Giving alcohol to a hungry crying child instead of milk
Advising a teenager to neglect all parental advice
Unleashing so much anger when love is on public display
Courting the girl next door just to steal her puppy
Endless stupidity, heaping more stains on an already bad personality
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Pettit Avatar
May 23, 2016 at 4:19 PM
All your lines describe someone following the left side of everything. One item is missing that the other reviewers have overlooked: Where is your line for the letter "H"? What you have spelled with your presented lines is "GAUCE".
Breidenthal Avatar
May 12, 2016 at 11:57 PM
Awesome poem! Just don't break the rules too much! :) Play it safe. A fantastic 7, bro :)
Neels Avatar
May 11, 2016 at 9:19 AM
Such a strong message you send with your Acrostic Funom.. Hope you are having a brilliant week
Makama Avatar
May 11, 2016 at 12:34 PM
I am a hundred fold so grateful my wonderful friend.
Devnath  Avatar
May 9, 2016 at 1:40 PM
The meaning of the word is beautifully penned my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
Makama Avatar
May 11, 2016 at 12:34 PM
I am a hundred fold so grateful my wonderful friend.
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