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Gauche

Giving alcohol to a hungry crying child instead of milk Advising a teenager to neglect all parental advice Unleashing so much anger when love is on public display Courting the girl next door just to steal her puppy Endless stupidity, heaping more stains on an already bad personality

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/23/2016 4:19:00 PM
All your lines describe someone following the left side of everything. One item is missing that the other reviewers have overlooked: Where is your line for the letter "H"? What you have spelled with your presented lines is "GAUCE".
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Date: 5/12/2016 11:57:00 PM
Awesome poem! Just don't break the rules too much! :) Play it safe. A fantastic 7, bro :)
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Date: 5/11/2016 9:19:00 AM
Such a strong message you send with your Acrostic Funom.. Hope you are having a brilliant week
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Funom Makama
Date: 5/11/2016 12:34:00 PM
I am a hundred fold so grateful my wonderful friend.
Date: 5/9/2016 1:40:00 PM
The meaning of the word is beautifully penned my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Funom Makama
Date: 5/11/2016 12:34:00 PM
I am a hundred fold so grateful my wonderful friend.

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