Gathering at the cemetery

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It was a somber cloudy day, sadness weighed heavy on us all. The family gathered to pay final respects. Gregorian chant filled the air as we looked up to heaven. We were burying a good man. He had been a role model, a loving husband and a caring father. the finality painfully sinking in goodbyes surreal AP: Honorable Mention 2025 Submitted on May 26, 2025 for CEMETERY contest sponsored by CONSTANCE LA FRANCE - RANKED 2ND

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Quoth Theraven

Date: 5/28/2025 5:41:00 PM

Line, It's a fine gathering, even in somber weather. Fitting for the best love offered, though they have to go. Only questions left it seems. -Richard

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/29/2025 8:39:00 AM

Indeed ~ thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Richard

David Crandall

Date: 5/27/2025 4:54:00 PM

It seems huge loss can feel unreal and can't seem to be felt all at once, great poem - I'm not sure who or when, but sorry for your loss.

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/28/2025 4:12:00 PM

Thanks David, loss is a lingering hurt we we feel over time and often never really get over ~