Eric Cohen Poet Rhyme

Gather Ye Rosebuds

Before the hot torch of the heavens fades,
And short shadows lengthen into long shades,
Quick set all your seeds lest the fast Fall frost,
Will bite at your bones ‘til your fruits are tossed.


"Arbitrum Divisa" form
Taken from "Passiflora"
Submitted 11/18/19
Contest:  "Fashion" sponsored by Julia Ward

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Brian Sambourne April 28, 2021 at 2:38 PM Such a short but powerful poem. Strong message of expediency for all to follow. A winner in multiple ways. Congratulations! Brian

James Inman January 14, 2020 at 11:50 PM I like that this write could have a multitude of interpretations. Very nice.

Gregory Richard Barden January 14, 2020 at 9:10 PM Eric - this was a tough contest to judge, as there were SO many great entries, but I nearly placed this alone at the top, as it has flow, imagery, and maturity of phrasing that, for me, sets it slightly above the rest. Exceptional work, and a delight to read. - GB

Connie Marcum Wong January 14, 2020 at 12:05 PM Congratulations on your first placement Eric! : ) Eric Cohen January 14, 2020 at 3:53 PM Thank's Connie. Appreciate the consideration.