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Garnet Sky Love Scenery

Pine rustles in gloomy afternoon
                                       Foretoken of turbulent storm

                                 Thunder tremors with violet lightning
                                              Descend electricity
                                          Burning pine tree forest

                                   Enamored couple walking in the forest
                              Ensconce for shelter in an abandoned house
                               Awaiting that the heavy rainfall drops stop
                                  Discovering a far away red lighthouse

                                             Calm reigns in ether
                                            Garnet sky is scenery
                                               Setting love story
                                        Carved as a heart and arrow
                                          Romance symbol in a tree


For It Takes Four Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Broken Wings
Third Place
8-11-2016

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Eve Roper Date: 8/23/2016 11:03:00 AM Nadya, congratulations on your win Hugs Eve Login to Reply Nayda Ivette Negron Flores Date: 8/23/2016 12:55:00 PM Thank you Eve

Constance La France Date: 8/22/2016 1:28:00 PM Nayda, congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautiful poem ~ Login to Reply Nayda Ivette Negron Flores Date: 8/22/2016 3:30:00 PM Thank you Constance

Beautiful Scars Date: 8/22/2016 12:27:00 PM Nayda, back with my congrats! :)-luloo Login to Reply Nayda Ivette Negron Flores Date: 8/22/2016 3:30:00 PM Thank you Laura

CayCay Jennings Date: 8/13/2016 4:04:00 PM I enjoyed your entry / write very much, Nayda - it is captivating ... CayCay Login to Reply Nayda Ivette Negron Flores Date: 8/13/2016 6:23:00 PM Thank you CayCay

Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 8/13/2016 9:16:00 AM Love the way you painted the canvas with visual art...enjoyed!!!! Login to Reply Nayda Ivette Negron Flores Date: 8/13/2016 11:55:00 AM Thank you Pace Ink U Script

Jan Allison Date: 8/12/2016 6:15:00 PM All four poems flow so beautifully together to create a lovely picture - great imagery and I love the image you found:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Nayda Ivette Negron Flores Date: 8/13/2016 11:55:00 AM Thank you Jan

Beautiful Scars Date: 8/12/2016 11:11:00 AM Wow Nayda, this is remarkable lady :) this will do very well in the contest. I love the theme and the flow, good luck :)-luloo Login to Reply Nayda Ivette Negron Flores Date: 8/12/2016 12:41:00 PM Thank you Laura

Laura Leiser Date: 8/11/2016 10:30:00 PM Excellent use of the four forms of poetry to express your idea, Nayda! You did great and GL in the contest:) Login to Reply Nayda Ivette Negron Flores Date: 8/12/2016 7:08:00 AM Thank you Laura.