Nayda Ivette Negron Flores Poet Verse

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Garnet Sky Love Scenery

Pine rustles in gloomy afternoon
                                       Foretoken of turbulent storm

                                 Thunder tremors with violet lightning
                                              Descend electricity
                                          Burning pine tree forest

                                   Enamored couple walking in the forest
                              Ensconce for shelter in an abandoned house
                               Awaiting that the heavy rainfall drops stop
                                  Discovering a far away red lighthouse

                                             Calm reigns in ether
                                            Garnet sky is scenery
                                               Setting love story
                                        Carved as a heart and arrow
                                          Romance symbol in a tree


For It Takes Four Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Broken Wings
Third Place
8-11-2016

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Eve Roper August 23, 2016 at 11:03 AM Nadya, congratulations on your win Hugs Eve Nayda Ivette Negron Flores August 23, 2016 at 12:55 PM Thank you Eve

Constance La France August 22, 2016 at 1:28 PM Nayda, congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautiful poem ~ Nayda Ivette Negron Flores August 22, 2016 at 3:30 PM Thank you Constance

Beautiful Scars August 22, 2016 at 12:27 PM Nayda, back with my congrats! :)-luloo Nayda Ivette Negron Flores August 22, 2016 at 3:30 PM Thank you Laura

CayCay Godwin August 13, 2016 at 4:04 PM I enjoyed your entry / write very much, Nayda - it is captivating ... CayCay Nayda Ivette Negron Flores August 13, 2016 at 6:23 PM Thank you CayCay

Pace Ink-U-Script August 13, 2016 at 9:16 AM Love the way you painted the canvas with visual art...enjoyed!!!! Nayda Ivette Negron Flores August 13, 2016 at 11:55 AM Thank you Pace Ink U Script

Jan Allison August 12, 2016 at 6:15 PM All four poems flow so beautifully together to create a lovely picture - great imagery and I love the image you found:-) hugs Jan xx Nayda Ivette Negron Flores August 13, 2016 at 11:55 AM Thank you Jan

Beautiful Scars August 12, 2016 at 11:11 AM Wow Nayda, this is remarkable lady :) this will do very well in the contest. I love the theme and the flow, good luck :)-luloo Nayda Ivette Negron Flores August 12, 2016 at 12:41 PM Thank you Laura

Laura Leiser August 11, 2016 at 10:30 PM Excellent use of the four forms of poetry to express your idea, Nayda! You did great and GL in the contest:) Nayda Ivette Negron Flores August 12, 2016 at 7:08 AM Thank you Laura.