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O vibrant and rich January Velvet sweet, warming the icy vine; Her crystalline - garnet evening, bright... Red orioles, whose lilting chorus The snowflakes, in tinsel greet: And moon knowing a gown's ONE STONE designs To adorn the night!... her Capricorn Jewel spills depicting vitality on flight, Glossing roses on meadows awakened From Winter's chilled poses. These restless burst and fragrant sighs make her throttle In joy-- bold maiden of new dawn's sky Brian's Select 3 Contest

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Agnes Krampe

Date: 11/17/2017 8:08:00 AM

Coming back with congrats on your win.

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 11/16/2017 8:26:00 AM

Beautifully penned, Congratulations on your win! :) xomo

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 11/15/2017 10:28:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Nette - my birthstone, Rhodolite Pyrope is my favorite version.

James Inman

Date: 11/15/2017 7:03:00 PM

I must admit, Nette, I sometimes wonder if you speak in poetry. : ) Beautiful.

John Lawless

Date: 11/15/2017 6:31:00 PM

...Oh vibrant and rich January....bold goddess of new dawn's sky" and all the beauty and imagery contained within those opening and closing phrases..Thanks for participating in the contest Nette

Eve Roper

Date: 11/8/2017 6:15:00 PM

this is beautiful, Nette, January my month :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/8/2017 5:48:00 PM

what a beautiful way to do the theme of stone. Was it for the stone contest? I love this, nette, and thanks for my win in your contest.

Winged Warrior

Date: 11/8/2017 6:04:00 AM

Such a beautiful write my friend...very smooth nette...god bless...^WW^

James Inman

Date: 11/8/2017 2:31:00 AM

Love that last line. You've written another beauty Nette. (Shhhh, my birthstone, don't tell anybody). Garnets used to be mined in the mountains of North Carolina near where I lived. Surprisingly they come in many different colors around the world, including yellows and greens.

Agnes Krampe

Date: 11/7/2017 6:13:00 PM

Lovely imagery, Nette. I love "a birthstone of flushed sky".

Silent One

Date: 11/7/2017 1:34:00 PM

Now this is beautiful imagery... beautiful words creating vivid imagery... Lovely poem

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/7/2017 7:11:00 AM

This is fabulous! This is such a wondrous write about your birthstone, and it's a beautiful stone my friend! You have developed this poem perfectly and with a sense of wonderment! I really enjoyed reading this tremendous piece this morning! What a grandiose poem, Great Work!!