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Garnet

O vibrant and rich January
Velvet sweet, warming  the icy vine;
Her crystalline - garnet evening, bright...
Red orioles, whose lilting chorus
The snowflakes, in tinsel greet: And moon
knowing a gown's ONE STONE designs
To adorn the night!...  her Capricorn
Jewel spills depicting vitality on flight,    
Glossing roses on meadows awakened
From Winter's chilled poses. These restless
burst and fragrant sighs make her throttle
In joy-- bold maiden of new dawn's sky



 Brian's Select 3 Contest

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Agnes Krampe November 17, 2017 at 8:08 AM Coming back with congrats on your win.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart November 16, 2017 at 8:26 AM Beautifully penned, Congratulations on your win! :) xomo

Gregory Richard Barden November 15, 2017 at 10:28 PM Congrats on your win, Nette - my birthstone, Rhodolite Pyrope is my favorite version.

James Inman November 15, 2017 at 7:03 PM I must admit, Nette, I sometimes wonder if you speak in poetry. : ) Beautiful.

John Lawless November 15, 2017 at 6:31 PM ...Oh vibrant and rich January....bold goddess of new dawn's sky" and all the beauty and imagery contained within those opening and closing phrases..Thanks for participating in the contest Nette

Eve Roper November 8, 2017 at 6:15 PM this is beautiful, Nette, January my month :)

Andrea Dietrich November 8, 2017 at 5:48 PM what a beautiful way to do the theme of stone. Was it for the stone contest? I love this, nette, and thanks for my win in your contest.

Winged Warrior November 8, 2017 at 6:04 AM Such a beautiful write my friend...very smooth nette...god bless...^WW^

James Inman November 8, 2017 at 2:31 AM Love that last line. You've written another beauty Nette. (Shhhh, my birthstone, don't tell anybody). Garnets used to be mined in the mountains of North Carolina near where I lived. Surprisingly they come in many different colors around the world, including yellows and greens.

Agnes Krampe November 7, 2017 at 6:13 PM Lovely imagery, Nette. I love "a birthstone of flushed sky".

Silent One November 7, 2017 at 1:34 PM Now this is beautiful imagery... beautiful words creating vivid imagery... Lovely poem

Russell Sivey November 7, 2017 at 7:11 AM This is fabulous! This is such a wondrous write about your birthstone, and it's a beautiful stone my friend! You have developed this poem perfectly and with a sense of wonderment! I really enjoyed reading this tremendous piece this morning! What a grandiose poem, Great Work!!

Kim Rodrigues November 6, 2017 at 6:23 PM A gorgeous gem of verse, dear Nette!

Darlene De Beaulieu November 6, 2017 at 5:54 PM This is a beautifully written poem. Have a nice evening my friend.

Tim Smith November 6, 2017 at 2:52 PM Lovely nette

Anne-Lise Andresen November 6, 2017 at 2:20 PM - Beautiful written, Nette - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Frederic Parker November 6, 2017 at 2:16 PM Poetry nette, sheer poetry

Vijay Pandit November 6, 2017 at 2:04 PM Gem of a poem--well articulated rhyme!