Notes About The Poem

For the New Chance with Pleiades for the New 
Year - Revised Description Poetry Contest,
Sponsored by Andrea Dietrich

Garnet

Gadabout butterflies
glitter like red sunset.
Gem sparkles in the west.
Gracious nature provides
glamour hues in winter.
Glad robin sings, lustrous.
Goodbye, last robustness.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Rodrigues Avatar
January 2, 2025 at 11:40 AM
Love gadabout butterflies! Congrats!
Buehler Avatar
January 2, 2025 at 2:03 PM
Thank you, Kim. :)
Miller Avatar
January 2, 2025 at 7:42 AM
Wonderful little gem, congratulations
Buehler Avatar
January 2, 2025 at 1:55 PM
Thank you, Terry. :)
mysore Avatar
January 2, 2025 at 12:23 AM
'Gem sparkles in the west' so well said. Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!
Buehler Avatar
January 2, 2025 at 1:45 PM
Thank you for your elating words of congratulations, Thriveni. Cheers!!
Dietrich Avatar
January 1, 2025 at 9:11 PM
This is wonderful use of garnet as a color. Congrats
Buehler Avatar
January 2, 2025 at 1:12 PM
Thank you for the happy thoughts, Andrea. I enjoyed your contest, as always. :)
Andresen Avatar
December 31, 2024 at 12:14 PM
- Happy colors in a beautiful context... lovely written, Evelyn :) - Good luck in the contest :) - I wish you a blessed new year :) - hugs
Buehler Avatar
December 31, 2024 at 2:03 PM
Your words are so much appreciated, Anne-Lise. I hope the new year holds many joys for you. :) hugs
Brul Avatar
December 31, 2024 at 5:24 AM
It is such a delight reading this short poem. A fave for me! Have a prosperous New Year ahead dear Judy. Stay creative! ^___^ JCB
Buehler Avatar
December 31, 2024 at 1:33 PM
I'm so thrilled with your warm remarks, and your fave, JCB. Heartfelt thanks and happy New Year. :=)
Rolland Avatar
December 30, 2024 at 6:58 AM
delicious poem, inspiring , i loved the G all along happy new year poet
Buehler Avatar
December 30, 2024 at 1:41 PM
Your appreciation is so nice. Thank you, Yann. I hope the New Year holds many joys for you. :)
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