Garlic

The smell of garlic in the morning I caught a whiff as I was yawning Though it made me salivate Garlic for breakfast? next time wait! I'd rather have it late at night Then your nose, I will not blight C'mon folks let's not fight Garlic for breakfast - that's not right!

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Gwendolen Song

Date: 3/21/2011 12:47:00 AM

Why NOT garlique in the morning? ha ha. I love it!! Slightly argumentative and sassy, I enjoyed this odorific write. ( ha ha ) Happy Spring! Gwendolen

Gert W. Knop

Date: 2/14/2011 8:39:00 AM

I'll add another "Buon giorno" to C.L.'s comment!! I do love garlic and it is soooo healthy! If someone can't smell it, they have to eat garlic too! But it mustn't be for breakfast though. Just to add that most times I only have coffee for breakfast! Enjoyed the read, Nick and thanks for your kind comments!...Gert, just to add: Dandelion leaves make a nice salad! So you should have some in your garden (hahaha!)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 1/12/2011 8:14:00 AM

This is funny. I do love garlic and once we went out with friends and my husband asked for garlic on a pizza. Much to our dismay the cook put a layer of garlic on the pizza like sauce. We did eat it after scraping off a lot of it. We could taste that garlic for days. Thanks for you comments. God Bless Phyl

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/12/2011 6:31:00 AM

YOU are TOO funny! [I am having a contest to HIGHLIGHT poets from outside the USA called Foreign Exchange, please add your talent to the writes. Place your best poem & on the bottom put the country where you now live.] Thank you! Light & Love

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/11/2011 10:21:00 PM

hahaha, this reminds me of the time I was teaching a classroom of foreign students and they got all upset when one of the students from some Asian country came into class with a very strong garlic odor time to time. If we were on a ship,they would have staged a mutiny!

Kash Poet

Date: 1/11/2011 10:02:00 AM

Very funny and interesting write!enjoyed it.Thanks Nick for your congratulatory message and inspiring words at my Piano Crystalline-kashinath

Anna-Marie Docherty

Date: 1/11/2011 6:52:00 AM

Phew-ee no thankyou, couldn't be done withit in the morning no matter how good... Great fun write, well done and thanks for commenting my "Like a thief in the night" glad you think it serves its cause...

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/11/2011 5:57:00 AM

Maybe not right Nick but very good for u .. a great piece of poetry my friend .. and healthy too..luv... Italians use garlic in everything ..and the flavor is unique.. as your poetry today ..enjoyed with luv..