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Garland Cinquain - Solitude

alone
solitude, shush.
the blessing of silence,
camouflaged in crowds of people.
set free

total!
the joy, peaceful,
wild, natural life's sounds.
solace in solitude once found.
wanton

pleasure
to live one's life
as a hermit, relaxed
out in the wild solitudes found
serene

no strife
mother nature
on who my life depends
my only friend, one i can trust
feeds me

happy
solitudes bliss
can i go back to strife
being tied down, deafening sound
my wife

alone
the joy peaceful,
as a hermit, relaxed
my only friend one i can trust
my wife
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Form Type: Syllabic
Origins: Unknown - 
Creator: Unknown - Anyone know?
Number of Lines: 30
Rhyme Scheme: Not applicable
Meter: Not applicable

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Moon Flower Date: 5/4/2018 5:45:00 AM Now, this is an excellent creation, Mick. Must be your own form, eh? Login to Reply Mick Talbot Date: 5/4/2018 11:17:00 AM Yeah, I thought so too, not one I invented, I wish ;-) It's getting the last stanza to make sense is the real fun bit. Nobody seems to know who invented the form, all I could find was this: Form Type: Syllabic.... Origins: Unknown.... Creator: Unknown.... Number of Lines: 30.... Rhyme Scheme: Not applicable.... Meter: Not applicable.... If there is anyone out there in cyberspace and you know the creator of the form spread the word. Thanks... Mick