Gargoyle

Gothic creatures of old
  gaze down from their ledges 
    glaring at unseen threats.
       Grotesque legends of stone
    garner my attention 
  garish symbols ward off
ghoulish evil demons.




Written on 11/30/2016
Pleiades
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Michaels Avatar
March 12, 2017 at 5:24 AM
Excellent! Great imagery - can almost picture them looming over the landscape. Congrats on a well-deserved win!
Leiser Avatar
March 12, 2017 at 9:26 AM
Thanks, John. Gargoyles are fascinating to look at, I think :)
Singh Avatar
February 19, 2017 at 7:54 AM
Great! Congrats!
Leiser Avatar
February 21, 2017 at 9:13 PM
Thank you, Sushma :)
Callus Avatar
February 10, 2017 at 2:53 PM
An excellent Pleiades with a Gothic topic which is right up my street, Laura. #7 Congratulations on placing first. Regards // paul
Leiser Avatar
February 10, 2017 at 6:17 PM
I've always been fascinated by gargoyles for some strange reason! Thanks, Paul. :)
White Avatar
February 10, 2017 at 1:19 AM
Laura, this is such a wonderful poem! Congratulations :)
Leiser Avatar
February 10, 2017 at 6:16 PM
Thanks, Darren :)
Daniel Avatar
February 10, 2017 at 1:11 AM
Hi Laura, congratulations on your win:) you chose a unique theme.
Leiser Avatar
February 10, 2017 at 6:15 PM
Thanks, Jo! I've always been fascinated with gargoyles :)
Canerdy Avatar
February 9, 2017 at 10:25 PM
A 7 for your top-winning poem, Laura! Janice
Leiser Avatar
February 10, 2017 at 6:15 PM
Thank you, Janis. :)
Krampe Avatar
February 9, 2017 at 9:43 PM
Congrats on your win with this beautifully flowing pleiades, Laura.
Leiser Avatar
February 10, 2017 at 6:14 PM
Thanks, Agnes. :)
Roper Avatar
February 9, 2017 at 8:58 PM
Very nice, Laura, very well deserved win,,,, congratulations Hugs Eve
Leiser Avatar
February 9, 2017 at 9:29 PM
Thank you, Eve. :)
Medders Tobechi Avatar
February 9, 2017 at 8:37 PM
Congratulations on a fine win.
Leiser Avatar
February 9, 2017 at 8:39 PM
Thank you, Janis :)
Rodrigues Avatar
February 9, 2017 at 7:41 PM
Congrats, Laura! Nice one!
Leiser Avatar
February 9, 2017 at 8:15 PM
Thank you, Kim! Glad you liked it :)
Merryman Avatar
February 9, 2017 at 5:52 PM
Laura, congrats on your 1st place win in my contest! You used a creative topic and your descriptive words flowed! Well done! Blessings, Kim
Leiser Avatar
February 9, 2017 at 7:00 PM
Wow! Thanks so much for the placement, Kim! I hope your mom is better and I'm glad to see you back on PS!! :)
Dietrich Avatar
December 4, 2016 at 5:07 PM
EXCELLENt verse in that style, Laura. I see this as a high placement!!
Leiser Avatar
December 4, 2016 at 10:34 PM
Thanks, Andrea :)
Andresen Avatar
December 1, 2016 at 3:21 AM
- We can find them in many places ... of ancient time - Well written, Laura - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Leiser Avatar
December 4, 2016 at 10:35 PM
Thanks for commenting, Anne Lise :)
Daniel Avatar
November 30, 2016 at 10:07 PM
Great write, Laura:)
Leiser Avatar
December 1, 2016 at 12:17 AM
Thanks, Jo :)
Leiser Avatar
December 1, 2016 at 12:07 AM
Thanks, Jo :)
Lawless Avatar
November 30, 2016 at 8:54 PM
g-g-g-great.....job Laura. I love to look up at the gargoyles atop some of the older structures in downtown Boston
Leiser Avatar
December 1, 2016 at 12:17 AM
They have always intrigued me. Thanks, John, for your comments :)
Leiser Avatar
December 1, 2016 at 12:06 AM
They have always intrigued me. Thanks, John, for your comments :)
Vinson Avatar
November 30, 2016 at 8:27 PM
Wow, Laura.... Perfection. : )
Leiser Avatar
November 30, 2016 at 8:45 PM
Thanks, Doug! I appreciate your kin commenting :)
Stover Avatar
November 30, 2016 at 8:24 PM
Excellent poem, even the layout expresses the theme.
Leiser Avatar
November 30, 2016 at 8:44 PM
Thanks, Christy!
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