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Garden's Beauty

Its charm, its bloom
A gift of spring breeze
Disappears fast
Something not oozing from heart
Something borrowed doesn’t last

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Pandita Sietesantos

September 7, 2014 at 1:22 AM

This is a beautiful powerful piece! Excellent write! Pandita

Mohammad Yamin

January 21, 2015 at 3:53 PM

Thanks for your appreciation of my Japanese Tanka Garden's Beauty. You are very kind. Love. -Mohammad

Hamida Yamin

January 21, 2015 at 3:45 PM

Thanks for your appreciation of my Tanka Garden's Beauty. You are very kind. Love. -Mohammad

Lucilla Carrillo

June 16, 2013 at 4:14 PM

You are so right. Thanks for sharing. ..... Licilla

Mohammad Yamin

January 21, 2015 at 3:56 PM

Thanks for your educated comments, Lucilla. I am grateful.

Mohammad Yamin

January 21, 2015 at 3:56 PM

Thanks for your educated comments, Lucilla. I am grateful.

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 15, 2013 at 7:38 AM

- Just want to say: - Have a nice day Mohammad - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Mohammad Yamin

January 21, 2015 at 4:00 PM

Sorry for this belated reply, Anne. Your comment was not communicated to me. I am reading it just today per chance. Thanks for visiting my Tanka and for your appreciation. Love. -Mohammad

Diana Mohammed

May 13, 2013 at 11:30 PM

It sounds sad...Love Diana

Mohammad Yamin

January 21, 2015 at 4:03 PM

It is sad, indeed, Diana Darling. Everything created must perish. Love. -Mohammad

Elizabeth Wesley

April 15, 2013 at 7:39 PM

Hi my friend, so nice to read this wonderful verse. the last line is priceless and certainly describes not only gardens but so many other fleeting things in our liives. Love, Lizzie

Hamida Yamin

January 21, 2015 at 3:42 PM

Although belated, I wish to thank you for your uplifting comments. Love. -Mohammad