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gardenias

curdling gardenias
milky whiteness tinged yellow
scent lingers

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Karen Jones

Date: 6/15/2024 9:24:00 PM

Beautiful imagery

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/16/2024 6:02:00 AM

Thank you, Karen!

Duke Beaufort

Date: 6/10/2024 4:56:00 PM

Kim, the images and description works really well. It pinpoints a particular moment in time perfectly.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/11/2024 5:09:00 PM

Thank you kindly, my friend!

Paige Hind

Date: 6/7/2024 3:10:00 PM

Your haiku is lovely; I could almost live the scent, <3

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/11/2024 5:10:00 PM

Yes!!

Silent One

Date: 6/7/2024 12:32:00 PM

so beautiful..

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/11/2024 5:10:00 PM

Thank you!

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 6/6/2024 3:41:00 PM

This haiku makes me feel like I'm holding gardenia. As a child, I was given a children's perfume that had the smell of gardenia. I can still imagine it. This is a haiku full of memories.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/6/2024 5:58:00 PM

As a child my scent was honeysuckle and also Sweet Honesty. Glad you cozied up and it brought back sweet memories! Hugs!

Yann Rolland

Date: 6/6/2024 3:20:00 PM

great poetry, Kim, realy love the spring here

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/6/2024 5:58:00 PM

We are having a wonderful Spring too! :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/6/2024 1:21:00 PM

great first line to describe them, Kim. Thanks for your lovely comments today.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/6/2024 6:00:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea! :) I gathered a couple when my grandaon was visiting and he liked the scent!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/6/2024 1:17:00 PM

Yes, the prolific blooms are beginning to turn yellow then brown, and it is sad to see them slowing fade away. Thank you for sharing this one with us. I enjoyed reading it. Sara K

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/6/2024 6:00:00 PM

So quickly they fade, but so glad that we had time to enjoy them. Thank you, Sara!

Sotto Poet

Date: 6/6/2024 12:09:00 PM

Wow, very nicely crafted Kim. You depicted perfectly the beauty and aroma of the flower.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/6/2024 6:01:00 PM

Thank you so much, Lasaad!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/6/2024 9:03:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your lovely "gardenias" write for a lovely flower. I love this write/I love this flower..... Have a blessed day writing away...........................

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/6/2024 9:52:00 AM

Thank you, Paula! God bless you always!

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