Maurice Yvonne Poet Free verse

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For inspiration I search license free photography and write according to what the image suggests to me. This is one of hundreds I have done. I intend on posting 100 examples of this type of writing.

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Garden Scented Poetry

you looked directly at me with 
bright blueberry blue eyes
adorned with a sincere singular smile 

freshly planted baby droplets of dew bloomed
filling the air in a most unique bouquet 

your elegance scented the sprawling outdoors  
in a spring flower eau de cologne  
i exhaled a happy sigh 
proclaiming 'i have arrived'

shy as i am...i blushed 

my face went from a velvet peach tone
to a childlike jujube red

i knew i was in love
not another flower would i ever pick

still 
all that is you 
lines our bed
each and every petal 


Mar. 10 2016
armand

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Poet Destroyer A October 7, 2016 at 7:10 AM Ok, I have to move on, and fall in love with your other writes... ;)

Poet Destroyer A October 7, 2016 at 7:08 AM Bright blueberry eyes, Maurice, I wish to absorb your child like smile... I'll just sit her indulging on your sweet write. You do as well... Linda

Joe Maverick September 12, 2016 at 8:56 AM Delicate yet strong wording Maurice, this really takes your breath.'

Paul Callus September 10, 2016 at 10:21 AM This is absolutely beautiful, Armand...scented poetry at its best! Captivating ending! Full marks to you. Regards // paul

Connie Marcum Wong August 31, 2016 at 2:37 AM Ahhh Armand, this poem has elegance, beauty and romance...a triple threat! I love it. Blessings, Connie ; ) 7

Daver Austin August 3, 2016 at 9:48 AM You place yourself within the picture sensitively, become one with the blossom. Georgia O'Keefe did this with her single flower and double flower works. I like the tenderness of this poem. Love, daver

Casarah Nance May 26, 2016 at 6:45 AM bright blueberry eyes...childlike jujube red... your descriptions are so wonderful and unique... You are so refreshing to read. I hope you are well my friend... hugs xx

Daver Austin April 9, 2016 at 12:07 PM "Freshly planted baby droplets of dew." My lips give a little dance reading this line out loud. Love the whole poem, but these few burbles make the whole special. Love, daver

Timothy Hicks March 21, 2016 at 2:35 AM I really love this, Armand! You took me by the hand through your emotions, displayed with vibrant colors and fruit. "blueberry eyes" "velvet peach tone" ... gorgeous phrasing.

Andrea Dietrich March 15, 2016 at 3:18 PM Armand, didn't you have pictures showing with your recent poems ? I am not seeing them in your two most recent posts. Miss you and hope you are doing ok.

Andrea Dietrich March 11, 2016 at 2:15 AM I echo Tim Smith here. Beautiful, Armand, just beautiful!

Tim Smith March 10, 2016 at 7:26 PM Very beautiful Armand !!!