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Garden Scented Poetry

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For inspiration I search license free photography and write according to what the image suggests to me. This is one of hundreds I have done. I intend on posting 100 examples of this type of writing.

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you looked directly at me with 
bright blueberry blue eyes
adorned with a sincere singular smile 

freshly planted baby droplets of dew bloomed
filling the air in a most unique bouquet 

your elegance scented the sprawling outdoors  
in a spring flower eau de cologne  
i exhaled a happy sigh 
proclaiming 'i have arrived'

shy as i am...i blushed 

my face went from a velvet peach tone
to a childlike jujube red

i knew i was in love
not another flower would i ever pick

still 
all that is you 
lines our bed
each and every petal 


Mar. 10 2016
armand

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/7/2016 7:10:00 AM

Ok, I have to move on, and fall in love with your other writes... ;)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/7/2016 7:08:00 AM

Bright blueberry eyes, Maurice, I wish to absorb your child like smile... I'll just sit her indulging on your sweet write. You do as well... Linda

Joe Maverick

Date: 9/12/2016 8:56:00 AM

Delicate yet strong wording Maurice, this really takes your breath.'

Paul Callus

Date: 9/10/2016 10:21:00 AM

This is absolutely beautiful, Armand...scented poetry at its best! Captivating ending! Full marks to you. Regards // paul

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/31/2016 2:37:00 AM

Ahhh Armand, this poem has elegance, beauty and romance...a triple threat! I love it. Blessings, Connie ; ) 7

Daver Austin

Date: 8/3/2016 9:48:00 AM

You place yourself within the picture sensitively, become one with the blossom. Georgia O'Keefe did this with her single flower and double flower works. I like the tenderness of this poem. Love, daver

Casarah Nance

Date: 5/26/2016 6:45:00 AM

bright blueberry eyes...childlike jujube red... your descriptions are so wonderful and unique... You are so refreshing to read. I hope you are well my friend... hugs xx

Daver Austin

Date: 4/9/2016 12:07:00 PM

"Freshly planted baby droplets of dew." My lips give a little dance reading this line out loud. Love the whole poem, but these few burbles make the whole special. Love, daver

Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/21/2016 2:35:00 AM

I really love this, Armand! You took me by the hand through your emotions, displayed with vibrant colors and fruit. "blueberry eyes" "velvet peach tone" ... gorgeous phrasing.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/15/2016 3:18:00 PM

Armand, didn't you have pictures showing with your recent poems ? I am not seeing them in your two most recent posts. Miss you and hope you are doing ok.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/11/2016 2:15:00 AM

I echo Tim Smith here. Beautiful, Armand, just beautiful!