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Garden Rose

Written August 21, 2013 There's a girl in the garden She's messing with your rose bed Plucking weeds out from your head And watering the seeds in your bed But where will she wander When the roses are dead Will she come back for more When they turn back to red She can run all alone Write this story in stone On concrete slabs Of skin and bone

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/31/2014 1:31:00 PM
another nicely done poem, I like your style of writing :)
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Date: 9/22/2013 9:20:00 PM
another one with such an interesting style. You are more surreal than me so I don't always get it. But it takes many kinds to make the poet's world and I find you very creative.
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Brandon Carter
Date: 9/22/2013 10:48:00 PM
Thanks! I sincerely enjoy and appreciate you're personal comments. I really enjoy writing with ambiguity and symbolism so it can be interpreted differently. If you want you should check out "In the Bucket" and "The Eyes on the Wall". They are my two favorite pieces I've written and are very different from one another.

Book: Shattered Sighs