Garden Roots

Garden Roots
Drawn by the feeder, seeds like a silo, the colorful and small birds, landing and perching, not too close, skittish and scared. The tree of life with a plethora of branches. A tiny bonsai forest designed for fairies and microscopic wildlife. Butterflies trapped inside a house-size net, landing so gently the hairs on my flesh cannot feel the sensation. The garden ever changing and I with it, as I tread upon its sacred ground. Soaked by sun, rain or cold from snow, the garden with outstretched arms.
bellicose bouquet branded by beauty stirs weeds — pulled up by their roots 6/7/2018 Mick Talbot’s haibun contest
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Gentry Avatar
July 7, 2018 at 9:48 AM
Congratulations on your win. Great imagery! Well done!
Rodrigues Avatar
July 7, 2018 at 10:04 AM
Thank you, Susan!
Talbot Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 2:38 PM
Great prose, however, the twist in the haiku I felt was not strong enough to make it to a 1st place. Congratulations on a 2nd place Kim, and many thanks for your participation, Mick
Rodrigues Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 4:08 PM
Thank you! :)
Kendrick Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 8:50 AM
Reads like a good contender for the contest. Don't you just hate those weeds in the garden. Thanks for the visit to my page. Your comments are uplifting. Sara
Rodrigues Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 8:55 AM
Glad to hear it, Sara! I appreciate your comment too! :)
Andresen Avatar
June 7, 2018 at 2:31 PM
- A lovely garden, Kim - I love my garden in spring and summer ... I have many fairies in my garden ... and everyone has their little house (I make them myself :) - Best wishes in the contest - hugs / / Anne-Lise :)
Rodrigues Avatar
June 7, 2018 at 2:53 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise! I joined a small garden! Loving my walks!
Cunningham Avatar
June 7, 2018 at 2:03 PM
Lovely discriptive verse Kim, no better place to be especially on a warm summers day. Good luck. Tom
Rodrigues Avatar
June 7, 2018 at 2:12 PM
I agree! Thanks, Tom!
Toney Avatar
June 7, 2018 at 1:51 PM
Lovely perspective, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 7, 2018 at 2:12 PM
Thank you, Mark!
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