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Garden of the Seventh Moon

Yellow lotus petals dance on ripples of reflecting pool in garden of the seventh moon under silver starred sky, geisha sit neath tree of raining blossoms caught by jasmine scented breeze Whispers like sweet song of nightingale spring from perfect lips as tiny hands tell story of passing day almond eyes smile and cover faces with paper fan Crushed ivory silk of robes rustle as maidens shuffle to footpath bridge where painted birds trapped in rice paper lanterns sing unnoticed in the silent winds of an Oriental night..

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/14/2009 8:49:00 AM
this is an amazing poem! well done...luke
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Date: 5/13/2009 12:30:00 PM
Like watching "Memoirs of a Geisha"....facinating!! Well done, Valerie!! ~ Carrie
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Date: 5/12/2009 11:08:00 PM
Love it, the scenery shows the Japanese culture of the geisha. The description is fantastic, hitting every point with perfect visual and vivid manifestation. Wonderful val.. absolutely wonderful
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