Jenish Somadas Poet Free verse

Garden of Soup

When effulgent sun scattered  his splendors in the firmament
And charming flowers shed their pure sweet bewitching fragrance
Then I whispered an adoring adieu to my loneliness
And cherished the blossoming muses of soup in ecstasy.


Honorable Mention in STRAND CHOICE 8,any form,any theme Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand

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Brenda Chiri January 28, 2020 at 6:47 PM Co grays on winning HM!;) Jenish Somadas January 28, 2020 at 9:17 PM Thank you Brenda..

Sandra Adams January 23, 2020 at 4:17 AM This is beautiful. Your muse is one of many of these fragrant flowers. What a beautiful garden what a beautifully crafted poem :) hugs Jenish Somadas January 23, 2020 at 4:46 AM Thank you Sandra for your poetic comment..

Gregory Richard Barden January 22, 2020 at 4:25 AM Of which you have added your own wonderful spices to ... seems the recipe is always changing, but always a delicious bowl, that! Nicely done, my friend! :o) Jenish Somadas January 22, 2020 at 5:03 AM Comments are a delight to read when it comes from a wonderful poet.. Thank you..

Aditi Upadhyaya January 20, 2020 at 8:48 AM short and sweet! love how you have expressed such beautiful thoughts in just four lines Jenish Somadas January 20, 2020 at 9:10 PM Thank you for reading my poems and it is a delight to read your comments..

Paul Callus January 18, 2020 at 2:02 PM Yours is a lovely, radiant poem, Jenish! Surrounded and inspired by inspiration! Regards // paul Jenish Somadas January 19, 2020 at 4:51 AM Thank you Paul for your inspiring comment..

Harry Horsman January 16, 2020 at 8:40 PM Love the title, and the poetry. says a lot about you.. Jenish Somadas January 17, 2020 at 12:13 AM Thank you Harry for your time and comment..

Nick Bagnall January 16, 2020 at 11:34 AM Thank you for your kind comments on my poetry today and thank you for teaching me a new word, effulgent, not often I have to look one up, nice write. Jenish Somadas January 17, 2020 at 12:12 AM Thank you for your kind words Nick.. Have a nice day..

Gershon Wolf January 15, 2020 at 2:51 PM Charming, Jenish! Best always, Gershon Jenish Somadas January 15, 2020 at 9:03 PM Thank you Gershon..

Vijay Pandit January 15, 2020 at 2:08 PM Lovely poem, Jenish. Jenish Somadas January 15, 2020 at 9:04 PM Thank you Vijay..

Demetrios Trifiatis January 15, 2020 at 1:00 PM Your Muse has certainly favored your inspiration with a charming poem dearest, Jenish. Hugs Jenish Somadas January 15, 2020 at 9:04 PM Thank you Demetrios for your kind words..