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Garden of Soup

When effulgent sun scattered his splendors in the firmament And charming flowers shed their pure sweet bewitching fragrance Then I whispered an adoring adieu to my loneliness And cherished the blossoming muses of soup in ecstasy. Honorable Mention in STRAND CHOICE 8,any form,any theme Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand

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Brenda Chiri

Date: 1/28/2020 6:47:00 PM

Co grays on winning HM!;)

Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/28/2020 9:17:00 PM

Thank you Brenda..

Sandra Adams

Date: 1/23/2020 4:17:00 AM

This is beautiful. Your muse is one of many of these fragrant flowers. What a beautiful garden what a beautifully crafted poem :) hugs

Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/23/2020 4:46:00 AM

Thank you Sandra for your poetic comment..

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 1/22/2020 4:25:00 AM

Of which you have added your own wonderful spices to ... seems the recipe is always changing, but always a delicious bowl, that! Nicely done, my friend! :o)

Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/22/2020 5:03:00 AM

Comments are a delight to read when it comes from a wonderful poet.. Thank you..

Aditi Upadhyaya

Date: 1/20/2020 8:48:00 AM

short and sweet! love how you have expressed such beautiful thoughts in just four lines

Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/20/2020 9:10:00 PM

Thank you for reading my poems and it is a delight to read your comments..

Paul Callus

Date: 1/18/2020 2:02:00 PM

Yours is a lovely, radiant poem, Jenish! Surrounded and inspired by inspiration! Regards // paul

Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/19/2020 4:51:00 AM

Thank you Paul for your inspiring comment..

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/16/2020 8:40:00 PM

Love the title, and the poetry. says a lot about you..

Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/17/2020 12:13:00 AM

Thank you Harry for your time and comment..

Nick Bagnall

Date: 1/16/2020 11:34:00 AM

Thank you for your kind comments on my poetry today and thank you for teaching me a new word, effulgent, not often I have to look one up, nice write.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/17/2020 12:12:00 AM

Thank you for your kind words Nick.. Have a nice day..