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Garden of Love

Under glowing heaven 
and the sound of birds flutter and quarrel.
A path to a bush of roses and blue forget-me-not
to a circlet etch bench, couple sit.

Her sweet beauty bewitching,
he lifts his left hand and cup her face. 
She tilts her face into his hands
her gaze curious and seeking.

Unable to help himself, 
he bent and placed his lips over hers. 
She wraps her arms around him 
and sank into the kiss.


9/12/2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Stars Avatar
September 14, 2017 at 9:32 AM
"and cup her face" ... help me understand that ...
Warrior Avatar
September 14, 2017 at 9:31 AM
I'm in love with your verse Eve...a beautiful garden my friend...god bless and best of luck...^WW^
Pandit Avatar
September 13, 2017 at 3:39 PM
Lovely story of romance, Eve--good luck for a win!
Smith Avatar
September 13, 2017 at 10:41 AM
Love the romance Eve, well done.
Smith Avatar
September 13, 2017 at 10:17 AM
Very lovely Eve...ahh, to be in love
Chakrabarty Avatar
September 13, 2017 at 6:54 AM
Honest, unpretentious love effortlessly described in the poem.Love.
Sivey Avatar
September 13, 2017 at 3:55 AM
Ah, the kiss of ecstasy! I really loved reading this incredible write this morning! This is a wondrous love poem, one that stands out towards the romantic side of me! And I just love that side! What a fabulous piece, Great Work!!
Andresen Avatar
September 13, 2017 at 3:54 AM
- Romance at its best, Eve - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
September 13, 2017 at 1:20 AM
what a charming romantic poem Eve:-) I find it hard to write romantic poems I much prefer humour :-) hugs Jan xx
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