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Garden of Agony In Alliteration

Gorgeous green garden Filled with fantastic flowers Three tremendous trees Tall enough to hide tormented towers There dwells a dark demolisher In this garden, green with grief Suffocating me in senseless sorrow Being brutalized, my breath becomes brief You might see many marvelous plants But these plants grow a poisonous pain Vomiting very venomous fumes As agony fills me up again

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Date: 3/23/2013 10:06:00 AM
beautiful poem, well written. In such a windy and snowy day, reading this piece just completes my relaxation. What a poem!
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Julie Alcin
Date: 3/30/2013 11:36:00 AM
Thank you, I really appreciate you're kind words

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