Garden of Agony In Alliteration

Gorgeous green garden
Filled with fantastic flowers
Three tremendous trees
Tall enough to hide tormented towers

There dwells a dark demolisher
In this garden, green with grief
Suffocating me in senseless sorrow
Being brutalized, my breath becomes brief

You might see many marvelous plants
But these plants grow a poisonous pain
Vomiting very venomous fumes
As agony fills me up again
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Makama Avatar
March 23, 2013 at 10:06 AM
beautiful poem, well written. In such a windy and snowy day, reading this piece just completes my relaxation. What a poem!
Alcin Avatar
March 30, 2013 at 11:36 AM
Thank you, I really appreciate you're kind words
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