Chris Green Poet Rhyme

Garden Dream

Garden Dream


Within this heart a sheltered loom
of woven thoughts in ribboned faire
Where marigolds sing melodies
a soft caress your flowing hair

As hummingbirds ignite your smile
upon a floating shade of blue
and cherry blossoms paint the sky
in nectar worn as sweet perfume

I open this, my chambered soul
so you may rest in perfect ease
Beneath an arbor’s shaded bliss
to linger on a fragrant breeze

For deep within this garden dream,
illumined by the sun above
I pray that you will stay awhile
to share these blooms of perfect love

Good morning Soupers

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Lifes' Tapestry October 29, 2018 at 6:43 AM Your phrasing dances across the tongue like gentle breeze. Delicate and sensual. Chris Green October 29, 2018 at 8:24 AM Thanks so much LT

Kelli White October 17, 2018 at 12:18 PM Magnificent dreamscape of adoration and bliss. Great writing and expression. Kelli Chris Green October 17, 2018 at 12:54 PM Thank you so very much Kelli. I appreciate your wonderful comment on my poem.

CayCay Godwin October 16, 2018 at 10:06 AM This is Chris, this is a poetry high, there for the reading and beauty breathing. So lovely. I feel your imagery as it absolutely rocks me awed. 1st stanza, last line - did you mean it to begin with 'and?' Chills I have. Poetry hugs ... CayCay Chris Green October 16, 2018 at 10:24 AM Thanks so very much my friend. No, I meant it how I wrote it...let's call it poetic license. : )

Line Gauthier October 15, 2018 at 4:15 PM Lovely, Chris. A beautiful poem. Chris Green October 15, 2018 at 5:27 PM Thank you so very much.

Gershon Wolf October 15, 2018 at 2:26 PM Are you sure that you are Chris Green, and not Shelley or Byron or Wordsworth, or Shakespeare?! This was tremendous. A FAVE for me. Best wishes, Gershon Chris Green October 15, 2018 at 2:30 PM I think I am Chris Green, at least I was the last time I looked. : ) Thank you so very much for your kind and encouraging words.

Sunlite Wanter October 15, 2018 at 11:02 AM Oh, yes, I'll stay awhile! Lovely! Chris Green October 15, 2018 at 11:11 AM Ok, great! Here, have a seat. It is beautiful in here at this time of day. : ) Thank you so much my friend. You are always welcome.

Becca Teagan October 15, 2018 at 10:22 AM Good morning Chris :) What a beautiful way to start the day... Chris Green October 15, 2018 at 11:10 AM Good morning Becca. Thank you for your nice comment to start my day. : )

Kim Rodrigues October 15, 2018 at 9:09 AM So dreamy! Very nice, Chris! Chris Green October 15, 2018 at 10:17 AM Thank you so much Kim