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Garden Dream

Garden Dream Within this heart a sheltered loom of woven thoughts in ribboned faire Where marigolds sing melodies a soft caress your flowing hair As hummingbirds ignite your smile upon a floating shade of blue and cherry blossoms paint the sky in nectar worn as sweet perfume I open this, my chambered soul so you may rest in perfect ease Beneath an arbor’s shaded bliss to linger on a fragrant breeze For deep within this garden dream, illumined by the sun above I pray that you will stay awhile to share these blooms of perfect love Good morning Soupers

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Lifes' Tapestry

Date: 10/29/2018 6:43:00 AM

Your phrasing dances across the tongue like gentle breeze. Delicate and sensual.

Chris Green
Date: 10/29/2018 8:24:00 AM

Thanks so much LT

Kelli White

Date: 10/17/2018 12:18:00 PM

Magnificent dreamscape of adoration and bliss. Great writing and expression. Kelli

Chris Green
Date: 10/17/2018 12:54:00 PM

Thank you so very much Kelli. I appreciate your wonderful comment on my poem.

Caycay Jennings

Date: 10/16/2018 10:06:00 AM

This is Chris, this is a poetry high, there for the reading and beauty breathing. So lovely. I feel your imagery as it absolutely rocks me awed. 1st stanza, last line - did you mean it to begin with 'and?' Chills I have. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Chris Green
Date: 10/16/2018 10:24:00 AM

Thanks so very much my friend. No, I meant it how I wrote it...let's call it poetic license. : )

Line Gauthier

Date: 10/15/2018 4:15:00 PM

Lovely, Chris. A beautiful poem.

Chris Green
Date: 10/15/2018 5:27:00 PM

Thank you so very much.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/15/2018 2:26:00 PM

Are you sure that you are Chris Green, and not Shelley or Byron or Wordsworth, or Shakespeare?! This was tremendous. A FAVE for me. Best wishes, Gershon

Chris Green
Date: 10/15/2018 2:30:00 PM

I think I am Chris Green, at least I was the last time I looked. : ) Thank you so very much for your kind and encouraging words.