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A beautiful woman delights the eye;
a wise woman, the understanding;
a pure one, the soul.

Minna Antrim

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GARDEN CRUSH

Tangerine hair, floral lips. Nostrils flare - petals thrill. Piano keys pressed. Pearls and lace, damask chest, Lingering sleeves. Classic- Beauty’s surrounded By her garden crush. Eye’s shadow, ear’s brushed With her ruddy locks. Silent meditation Of her clenched hand. Soft petals. Ruby rocks. 7/1/2021

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 7/13/2021 11:40:00 PM
WOW with a capital W Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/14/2021 5:00:00 AM
Thanks so much! When I can combine art and poetry, makes my day! :)
Date: 7/9/2021 3:42:00 PM
Lost for words Kim. Takes a good one to do that to me. Can imagine someone reading that in a garden with the the scent of flowers gently wafting on the breeze. Best regard and stay safe, David in NZ
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/9/2021 3:49:00 PM
Thanks so much, David :)
Date: 7/6/2021 5:29:00 PM
Amazing altogether. I think I just got the last stanza. Awesome, Kim. ~ Rocked
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/9/2021 5:59:00 AM
Thank you, my friend!
Date: 7/6/2021 1:48:00 PM
Very descriptive, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/9/2021 6:00:00 AM
Thank you, Mike!
Date: 7/2/2021 4:15:00 AM
Lovely, I can almost smell the earth...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/2/2021 4:32:00 AM
Thanks! Love that! :)
Date: 7/2/2021 1:16:00 AM
You have been well inspired, Kim. A delightful poem. Loved it. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/2/2021 3:37:00 AM
Thank you, sweet friend! Hugs :)
Date: 7/1/2021 10:55:00 AM
Great similes, wonderful images, excellent write. Thoroughly enjoyed reading.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/2/2021 3:37:00 AM
Thank you, dear one!
Date: 7/1/2021 9:48:00 AM
Striking simile, sonorous stream of words, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/1/2021 10:01:00 AM
Thank you, dear friend!
Date: 7/1/2021 7:56:00 AM
Nothing more pleasing to the eye than a beautiful garden. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/1/2021 10:01:00 AM
Thank you, Tom!
Date: 7/1/2021 7:00:00 AM
Fantastic write Kim, colors and great imagery shed more allure on your beautiful poem. Blessings and best wishes
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/1/2021 7:01:00 AM
Thank you, Lasaad!
Date: 7/1/2021 5:54:00 AM
Beautiful work.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/1/2021 7:02:00 AM
Thank you, Christuraj!
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