Garden Crush

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A beautiful woman delights the eye; a wise woman, the understanding; a pure one, the soul. Minna Antrim Read more at https://www.brainyquote.com/topics/beautiful-woman-quotes GARDEN CRUSH Tangerine hair, floral lips. Nostrils flare - petals thrill. Piano keys pressed. Pearls and lace, damask chest, Lingering sleeves. Classic- Beauty’s surrounded By her garden crush. Eye’s shadow, ear’s brushed With her ruddy locks. Silent meditation Of her clenched hand. Soft petals. Ruby rocks. 7/1/2021

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/13/2021 11:40:00 PM

WOW with a capital W Kim!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/14/2021 5:00:00 AM

Thanks so much! When I can combine art and poetry, makes my day! :)

David Smith

Date: 7/9/2021 3:42:00 PM

Lost for words Kim. Takes a good one to do that to me. Can imagine someone reading that in a garden with the the scent of flowers gently wafting on the breeze. Best regard and stay safe, David in NZ

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/9/2021 3:49:00 PM

Thanks so much, David :)