Garden Courtship

It would be a dulcet to my ear 
If you would waft your little song 
the tranquility of this blissful moment
would only add a whisper of eloquence
 to the fragrant splendor of the garden lavender
and would thus lilt my spirit
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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La France Avatar
November 4, 2010 at 6:57 AM
Very visual and lovely, soft and splendid~~
Mason Avatar
April 13, 2010 at 2:09 PM
I can't ever get enough of the smell of lavender ... smile ... wonderful write here, Robb !! Hope you're enjoying the spring.
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 9, 2010 at 10:27 PM
Robb, You did a great job of getting all the words in just a few lines. Best of luck in the contest. I love your title too. Aloha, Connie
Mirassou Avatar
April 9, 2010 at 6:01 PM
Hi, that's a great beginning to a very nice poem. You might like my poem, "Garden Affair".
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