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Garden Courtship

It would be a dulcet to my ear If you would waft your little song the tranquility of this blissful moment would only add a whisper of eloquence to the fragrant splendor of the garden lavender and would thus lilt my spirit

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Date: 11/4/2010 6:57:00 AM
Very visual and lovely, soft and splendid~~
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Date: 4/13/2010 2:09:00 PM
I can't ever get enough of the smell of lavender ... smile ... wonderful write here, Robb !! Hope you're enjoying the spring.
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Date: 4/9/2010 10:27:00 PM
Robb, You did a great job of getting all the words in just a few lines. Best of luck in the contest. I love your title too. Aloha, Connie
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Date: 4/9/2010 6:01:00 PM
Hi, that's a great beginning to a very nice poem. You might like my poem, "Garden Affair".
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