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Garden Bulbs

With flaky brown skin, Pungent bulbs spout sourness: lachrymal layers.

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James Fraser

Date: 9/21/2009 12:29:00 PM

I'm crying now Raul, wish i wrote this one>>James

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/21/2009 9:14:00 AM

Thank you for sharing Raul. Have a beautiful day. Love, Carol

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/21/2009 5:49:00 AM

lachrymal layer-can we avoid that--yes let the water run on your hands and onions before peeling them:)yet the other lachrymal layers are hard to heal--bravo Raul--Charma

Abe Lopez

Date: 9/20/2009 5:01:00 PM

I hate waking up those lachrymal layers . but I like eating those fried onions on a greasy burger from the bowling Alley in darko! :-)

Gert W. Knop

Date: 9/20/2009 4:49:00 PM

Hi Raul, firstly thanks for your comment. I havn't been online for a week as I had to look for a new flat and now I'll be living in germany's outmost eastern corner in Zittau (Saxonia) which is close to the Czech and polish border. i will be moving there by December. Liked much your Senryu. I use my glasses to avoid flow of tears....well done writing....Gert

John Freeman

Date: 9/20/2009 3:38:00 PM

Yep, thoes Lachrymal layers go into overtime, when these bulbs are disturbed.Lol, Sincerely Moses

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 9/20/2009 2:44:00 PM

I just heard an interesting fact on the radio this morning. They say that they used onion in the Egyptian times because the onion had rings that made them think it was the circle of life. Anyway was interesting. God Bless Phyl

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/20/2009 2:19:00 PM

So true, Raul, those onion bulbs produce vegetables that result in lachrymal tears. Nicely done! Love, Carolyn