Garden

pernicious weeds a metaphor
for wild growth inside 
my mind and soul

dandelion mating with brambles
wild cats’ rampant Rubus 
grinding teeth and thorns

reason guides the trowel
for emotions to follow
while thistles whistle their good bye 
and morning glory says its farewell

metamorphosis as pruning shears
and loppers attack a lopsided view
of what is and is not

energy about in the Universe
and sometimes it passes through me
elates where doom had resided

ragwort falls by the wayside
groans as it passes out of life
nettles give up their sting
and the compost heap grows
ready to nourish another season
of better days to come
as long as my rake stays in tune
with hard toil and soil

I actually quite like 
dirt passing through my fingers
don’t mind callus and blisters
to paint a map on my skin

life can be rugged
but there are lemon trees
in my overgrown patch
and I’m ready to taste
suck and feel 
what is on offer

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Date: 11/22/2022 10:38:00 AM
- ... a complete purification, Kai - hugs
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 11/23/2022 12:59:00 AM
Thank you Sunshine Smile. I appreciate that. Kind wishes to you ...
Date: 11/21/2022 1:27:00 AM
Oh, awesome. I love it :) Abiding hope and feelings so bold. Love it. God bless you. Love, Gina
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 11/22/2022 3:15:00 AM
Thank you Regina. God bless you too and kind wishes, Kai
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