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And Elijah looked down Upon the earthly ground and Shouted all the torrent of worry And surrendering joy left in his soul. In the morning he awoke to a new light, And staggered across the wet moss He had rambled across the day prior when he was still stuck in the mire.

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Date: 1/7/2016 1:38:00 PM
Again your imagery makes you want to re-read it
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Matt Caliri
Date: 1/10/2016 1:45:00 AM
Thanks so much for your encouraging words. It's so nice to get feedback.
Date: 1/2/2016 11:42:00 PM
wonderful!
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Matt Caliri
Date: 1/10/2016 1:49:00 AM
You're wonderful.
Date: 1/1/2016 9:35:00 AM
Glad to make your acquaintance. Great write.
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Date: 1/1/2016 1:54:00 AM
beautiful
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Matt Caliri
Date: 1/10/2016 1:51:00 AM
You're beautiful.
Date: 12/31/2015 8:28:00 PM
I have been asked through email from poetry soup to check your poems and picked Garbage. Cheers happy new year
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Date: 12/31/2015 1:56:00 PM
Certainly a well written meaningful poem
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Date: 12/31/2015 1:16:00 PM
Fine write on Elijah joy in his soul
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