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Garage Sale

GARAGE SALE Things They are staring at me Pleading to please use me! One year, two years, three years Had passed Things, they are still ogling at me. Garage sale today Things, I listen to your pleadings Yes, I will take you out Give you away with a heavy heart!

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Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 6/5/2011 2:03:00 PM

ah you've captured that senes of holding on to things quite well here-- haha no wonder I never really can push through with holding a garage sale, haha I am a packrat ;) hope this helps one typo for ogling-- and thank you so much for passing by my writes- that is awesome that you found your muse after you got back :) I think you will find a lot of inspiration here as well :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/4/2011 9:16:00 PM

I luv garage and yard sales too Dalila and u have penned a beauty with this piece on a great activity for Spring and Summer months.. giving things a personality .. awesome luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/4/2011 4:05:00 PM

Wonderful write with wit and humor, Dalila

Skat A

Date: 6/4/2011 1:28:00 PM

really funnny poem dalila long live the garage sale Luv*Skat