Gap Fillers

what fills the space between lines?
the gaps between words
the crack and cleft of hesitation
the break-in breaches
the silent pause of interruptions
ponder it in contemplation!

angstwisdomfree verse

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Eve Roper

June 23, 2018 at 9:07 PM

Congratulations on your great win, John, beautiful imagery :) ... Hugs Eve ~`*

Susan Ashley

June 22, 2018 at 10:56 PM

Congratulations John on your wonderful win with your thoughtful and excellently expressed poem. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Susan Gentry

June 22, 2018 at 7:18 PM

Congratulations on your win with this clever well-written poem!

Gershon Wolf

June 20, 2018 at 6:57 PM

Wow, John! Excellent poesy … 'the crack and cleft of hesitation' - an ingenious depiction of a pause! Congrats on your well-deserved winner! ~ Gershon

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 20, 2018 at 6:56 PM

- A skilled and great 6 line poem, from you John :) - It must have been difficult to judge, I think everyone is amazing, with different themes - Congratulations on a well deserved 2nd place in the contest :) - hugs // Anne -Lise :)