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'game Over'

her face was beaming
her best kept secret exposed
he could see the love



10/05/2011


Contest: Short Poem
By: Wilma N. Neels
11th Place

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Duval Hyppolite

May 17, 2011 at 7:02 AM

I choose that one to read well done

Carol Sunshine Brown

May 16, 2011 at 11:29 AM

Congratulations on your win in Judy's contest Wilma. Love,Carol

Michael J. Falotico

May 14, 2011 at 4:38 AM

I agree with p.d. big smiles from this Art... I love it and in my favs it goes... love MJF

Poet Destroyer A

May 13, 2011 at 8:26 PM

wow,, this is the way a fun love begins... Wilma,, nice short poem and it says it all... good luck,, p.d.

Emma Buckeridge

May 13, 2011 at 6:52 AM

Many congratulations on your win, Emma x

Jack Horne

May 12, 2011 at 12:36 PM

Many congrats on your win, Wilma : )

Carolyn Devonshire

May 12, 2011 at 10:16 AM

Sweet Wilma, Congratulations on your win, Love, Carolyn

Kash Poet

May 12, 2011 at 7:39 AM

This is a little gem!Congrats Wilma on your win...

Dr.Ram Mehta

May 12, 2011 at 7:22 AM

Congratulations on the win in the contest of judy,Wilma

Andrea Dietrich

May 11, 2011 at 8:14 PM

oh, I just saw this one recently. Congratulations. Glad to see it won!

Judy Konos

May 11, 2011 at 6:59 PM

Thank you for being in my contest

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

May 11, 2011 at 4:09 PM

Congrats Wilma on your super win in Short Poem contest my friend.. excellent entry as always..enjoy another sweet success..luv..

Samual Ronthorpe

May 11, 2011 at 2:54 PM

This is very good. Lots of underlying imagery. Excellent job and congrats. I really liked you made her female, nice touch.

Andrea Dietrich

May 10, 2011 at 7:15 PM

This is AWESOME. I love it, Wilma!!

Ralph Taylor

May 10, 2011 at 2:17 PM

Beautiful piece, Wilma. Enjoyed. Hope this finds you well. Thanks for your kind words on my recent postings. Enjoy the rest of your week. best to you and yours. luv Ralph

Dr.Ram Mehta

May 10, 2011 at 2:00 PM

Lovely signs of love conveyed thro good images, Wilma

Kash Poet

May 10, 2011 at 11:21 AM

wonderful Senryu ....enjoyed..

Sarah Seraphin

May 10, 2011 at 11:05 AM

* “Ow * Tis The Most Indiscribable of Beautiful Momments And Emotions * When Two Hearts Find Love * Beautiful Wilma” * again as but a blink ago i find myself envisioning this lovely verse * brings a smile and warmth to ones heart * for this happiness within another along with * the dreams of love inside oneself * “Soft & Beautiful” * hugs and kisses * kisses and hugs * sarah

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

May 10, 2011 at 9:22 AM

Yup, game over indeed! haha traitor expression huh? hmmm is this inspired by somebody? oh wait have to look for your other write that you mentioned-- wish me luck that it doesn't take me a hundred years.... hugs to you :)