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GAMBOLLING WITH THE SHEPHERDs CROOK

Gambolling along as ewe do, happy and carefree. Ewe’d do it all over again, in the greening esprit. Gambolling in full wool, unaware of morrow’s snip. Ewe see only what is in fashion, not the future clip. Gambolling with the Shepherd’s crook, behaving baa-dly. Ewe do you, follow the sheepish crowd gladly. Gambolling off a cliff, unless the one snatched from danger. Ewe were there, curious and excited alongside the manger. Gambolling strides bring you beside still waters and rest. Ewe’re after risen sun, a greener pasture where ewe are blest.

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Date: 3/21/2024 10:04:00 AM
Awe...so fun Kim Congratulations! :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/21/2024 10:46:00 AM
Thank you, Linda!
Date: 3/7/2024 5:20:00 PM
Ewe got it going on in this fun write, Kim. Gambolling is a new word for me, and it fits so well. Good luck in contest!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/8/2024 1:46:00 PM
I appreciate it and glad you learned a new word! Thanks, David!
Date: 3/7/2024 2:08:00 PM
Kim, U2 are a great poet! I love what you did here.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/8/2024 1:46:00 PM
oh ewe! ;) Thanks, Duke!
Date: 3/6/2024 10:20:00 PM
Kim, You have written couplets that ooze charm, humour and ingenuity. Best of luck with this. Immaculate piece. Howard
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/7/2024 3:12:00 AM
Thank ewe ;) I appreciate your sweet comment!
Date: 3/6/2024 8:41:00 PM
Clever ewe, Kim! Love your use of "baa-dly" too . The last couplet looks back to the 23rd psalm. Very clever. Many thanks for ther stop by. Best to you. / Maurice
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/7/2024 3:15:00 AM
Thank ewe! I love that you liked “baa-dly,” and noticed the reference to the 23rd Psalm :) Hugs ~ Kim
Date: 3/6/2024 4:41:00 PM
Ewe've created something marvelous for the contest. Loved your rhymes and your humorous creativity. Ewe did a great job, hugs, Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/6/2024 6:02:00 PM
Thank you, Sara! :) Ewe are wonderful!
Date: 3/6/2024 12:44:00 PM
Leave it to ewe Kim, ovine imagery is off the scale, but never overpowers the underlying message, I can only v’ewe this one being a winner, cheers David
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/6/2024 1:33:00 PM
I appreciate ewe ;) Thank you, David!
Date: 3/6/2024 12:19:00 PM
Lovely rhymes Kim, I really liked the flow of you couplets and take on the contest... Best of luck..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/6/2024 12:43:00 PM
Thanks! Sometimes an idea pops up! I appreciate you, Silent!
Date: 3/6/2024 12:11:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful Ewe write. "Good Luck" Have a wonderful spring day.........................
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/6/2024 12:17:00 PM
Thank ewe ;) Paula! Happy Spring!
Date: 3/6/2024 11:10:00 AM
Dear Kim, Your poem is such a delightful journey through life's ups and downs, beautifully woven with sheepish imagery. Your words capture the essence of carefree joy and the innocence of living in the moment. It's to embrace life's gambols with open arms despite the uncertainties that may lie ahead. Kim, your creativity shines through every line with pictures of sheepish adventures. This is a very charming piece that bubbles with the playful spirit within us all. - Blessings, Daniel
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/6/2024 12:18:00 PM
Thanks so much, Daniel! Delighted that ewe ;) found this piece charming! I had fun writing it!

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