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Gamblers - Lune For Contest

Gamblers – Lune for contest

lucky charms
scattered under chair
without milk


//visual #7//

8/6/2015

humori do not know?

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Kim Merryman

August 17, 2015 at 12:40 PM

Great lune, John! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

August 16, 2015 at 11:19 PM

What a wonderful imagery John! Congrats on big win!

Poet Destroyer A

August 16, 2015 at 8:51 PM

Hi John, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~

Skat A

August 16, 2015 at 1:32 AM

John, congratulations in Andrea's "Pretty Little Lunes contest" SKAT

John Lawless

August 16, 2015 at 5:47 PM

Thanks SKAT

Jan Allison

August 15, 2015 at 7:38 AM

I didn't even know what the image was John - lovely write my congrats:-) hugs jan xx

Jan Allison

August 16, 2015 at 5:59 PM

To my knowledge its not a cereal we have - with all that colour and those e numbers I' m glad lol:-) hugs Jan

John Lawless

August 16, 2015 at 5:46 PM

Jan, it looked like Lucky Charms to me....

Casarah Nance

August 15, 2015 at 7:22 AM

Nicely done! Grats on your win!

John Lawless

August 15, 2015 at 7:36 AM

Thanks Casarah, I could never figure out how the kids could eat that stuff but it is colorful...

Paul Callus

August 15, 2015 at 4:27 AM

A most unique take on this visual, John! I like!! Congrats on a merited win. // paul

John Lawless

August 15, 2015 at 7:35 AM

Thanks Paul, I had a little fun with this form

Andrea Dietrich

August 15, 2015 at 1:23 AM

It was very interesting how you did the lucky charms! Great way of looking at the picture, John. Congrats in my contest.

John Lawless

August 15, 2015 at 7:34 AM

Very interesting little form ... maybe the lucky charms worked....

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