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Gallantly On a Galactic Voyage

Galactic marvel; Gallant Galahad to swimming gala. Gallery of sirens lying galore; a sexy display. On bed of Galax, a living Galatea, he sees Hallah. A tactical Galago, he jumps wooing the gal to play. In Galician, her Lactose voice: “Bring me Venus.” Her wish send him in alacrity to the galaxy. Over Milky Way and planets, he flies a genius, Defying Big Bear and the Pleiades in vanity. His tic, he mocks Galileo he meets high above. He dances proudly around the galactic plane. Gall he shows to grab the great Goddess of love, none but Hallah;“Galah!”from her throne she mocks in disdain!

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/23/2016 12:16:00 AM

I don't get this particular contest, but my hat is off to you for attempting it. It is quite a creative write. Good luck in the contest

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 8/23/2016 3:23:00 AM

Hi feel so comfortable you read and appreciated..had to struggle finding words! :D Thanks so much Sunita

Eve Roper

Date: 8/22/2016 11:58:00 PM

great job on the use of alliteration, Sunita, enjoyed reading good luck in the contest. Hugs

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 8/23/2016 12:15:00 AM

Thanks so much Eve for having a look and the appreciation. Love it. Sunita :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/22/2016 4:05:00 PM

wow, a sensational ride through the realm of mythic wonder.. this good, sunita; great use of alliteration..huggs

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 8/22/2016 11:03:00 PM

Thanks for reading and such wonderful comment from your part nette. I appreciate much :) Sunita