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Galaxy Spirals

My galaxy spirals in incubation of sacred dream 
The 5th element, silent and unseen 
Sparks the immortal flame within my skin
Spiritual mother turns my world 
The life that is both old and new 
Blends in unison and in truth 
The maiden sings her song so pure 
The mother hums a lullaby of star and moon 
The crone groans on in an ancient tongue 

Inspiration of this earthen home

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/22/2020 7:44:00 AM

Your inspiration turned out a lovely missive, Lacy

Lady Labyrinth

Date: 3/13/2020 5:35:00 AM

I look forward to reading more of your stories....keep writing. x

Line Gauthier

Date: 2/27/2020 1:09:00 AM

Back to congratulate you on your POTD, Lacy.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 2/26/2020 5:52:00 PM

Hi Lacy Dream, somehow my comment ended up with the wrong poet. This poem is as ethereal as the galaxies themselves. Congratulations on your POTD

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/26/2020 11:39:00 AM

A warm welcome to Poetry Soup Lacy. Congratulations on having this enchanting poem honored with POTD! Aloha, Connie

Charles Messina

Date: 2/26/2020 7:02:00 AM

Nicely done, Lacy. Congrats on POTD. Charlie

Juanita Smalls

Date: 2/25/2020 10:59:00 PM

Nice write Lacy.

Lacy Dream

Date: 2/25/2020 10:25:00 PM

Wow thanks everyone x

Mark Koplin

Date: 2/25/2020 7:10:00 PM

Beautiful poem. Well done

John Lawless

Date: 2/25/2020 3:38:00 PM

Listen to the crones as they possess an ancient knowledge. Intriguing write Lacy

Mark Morris

Date: 2/25/2020 2:14:00 PM

*ether (I hate auto correct)

Mark Morris

Date: 2/25/2020 2:12:00 PM

Yes, I believe the other exists as well.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 2/25/2020 1:47:00 PM

The entire poems is magical. I like this thought - "Blends in unison and in truth" This is so beautiful and uplifting. Congratulations Lacy, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/25/2020 1:32:00 PM

- A lovely poem, Lacy - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - // Sun :)

Charlie Smith

Date: 2/25/2020 12:36:00 PM

Congratulations for POTD honors, Lacy, well done...

John Watt

Date: 2/25/2020 10:53:00 AM

Lovely poetic thoughts, Lacy. I love the line, "My galaxy spirals in incubation of sacred dream". Congrats on your POTD ~ John

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/25/2020 9:14:00 AM

Congrats Lacy on poem of the day..great poetry.

Heidi Sands

Date: 2/25/2020 8:38:00 AM

Congratulations for POTD :)

Joseph May

Date: 2/25/2020 8:37:00 AM

Congrats on POTD, nicely done..

Ts Poetry

Date: 2/25/2020 7:53:00 AM

True inspiration, welcome and congratulations on being featured

Daniel Turner

Date: 2/25/2020 7:52:00 AM

Congratulations Lacey on POTD. Welcome to the soup:)

Winged Warrior

Date: 2/25/2020 4:23:00 AM

Superb poetry my friend... I've spiraled away LD...Congrats!! on POTD!! and a BIG Welcome to poetry soup...all the best from the Wingster...^WW^ :o)