Galaxy Girl

Together,
I think we’re in space
Cause I’ve built her a rocket ship.
Made of dreams and hope.
3….
2...
1...
Blast off.

I showed her shooting stars.
And she told me how to chase them.
She showed me the constellations in my freckles
And I asked her to kiss them.

She wears Saturn’s rings on her finger
And the world is in the palm of her hand
Her voice can make the sun shine
When I coax a smile
The stars twinkle

But I think together
     Together
We could make the sun jealous of our glow
And I know together
     Together
We create starlight

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 11/29/2017 11:03:00 AM
You have so much talent. Your creativity is awe inspiring. Yep, add this one to the list as well.
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Iris Blade
Date: 11/29/2017 8:34:00 PM
As you are one of my favorite poets on the Soup, that means a lot. Thank you!
Date: 10/6/2017 4:52:00 AM
It's beautiful :) Together you can. Beautiful imagery in your poem.
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Iris Blade
Date: 10/6/2017 11:20:00 AM
Thank you so much! I showed her this one and she thought the same. Have a nice day!
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