Lynn Dolly Poet Free verse

Galaxies Apart

Hurting you wasn't my intention
For me to keep sanity
My spirit halted me with an intervention

You're a shot in the dark
Our minds are galaxies apart

Too much conflict
While I disliked it,
You seem to be an addict

I'm more content
Finding less and less to vent

My battles are fought by me
Your battles are an Odyssey 
Clash of the Titans, Greek mythology

Too much drama for me
I'll retreat while you cry to your momma
Hopefully peace and happiness find you tomorrow

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Wayland Bunch June 1, 2013 at 2:15 PM You are enlightened on many levels. Sometimes you just have to wait for others to catch up, but definitely no need waiting for those headed in another direction. Nice work. Lynn Dolly June 1, 2013 at 9:19 PM Thanks again Wayland! Life's too darn short. Better be spent happy. Cheers, Sharon

Poet Tacito May 17, 2013 at 12:04 PM In love, battles should be for each other. Not against. I dig this. Excellent work! Lynn Dolly June 1, 2013 at 9:18 PM Hello Drake! When it's not 50/50, needs to be let go. Thanks for stopping by. Cheers, Sharon

Anne-Lise Andresen May 17, 2013 at 3:58 AM - You deserve the very best - such relationships will never go well - Sharon, a very well written poem. - Take care of yourself! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Lynn Dolly May 17, 2013 at 4:09 AM Yes, i do! ;) We get what we accept, and sometimes it's really hard to step up the standard, but it's for the best. Thanks for your kind words and stopping by Anne-Lise. Cheers, Sharon

Yours Truly May 17, 2013 at 2:05 AM Awesome portrayal of separation of two people's connection! I liked this one very much. Maybe you would give me the honor of reading some of my own with some feedback? Keep up the great work! -Yours Truly Lynn Dolly May 17, 2013 at 4:10 AM Thank you Yours Truly, and of course I'll stop by! Good Juju ;) Cheers, Sharon