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Galaxies Apart

Hurting you wasn't my intention For me to keep sanity My spirit halted me with an intervention You're a shot in the dark Our minds are galaxies apart Too much conflict While I disliked it, You seem to be an addict I'm more content Finding less and less to vent My battles are fought by me Your battles are an Odyssey Clash of the Titans, Greek mythology Too much drama for me I'll retreat while you cry to your momma Hopefully peace and happiness find you tomorrow

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Wayland Bunch

Date: 6/1/2013 2:15:00 PM

You are enlightened on many levels. Sometimes you just have to wait for others to catch up, but definitely no need waiting for those headed in another direction. Nice work.

Lynn Dolly
Date: 6/1/2013 9:19:00 PM

Thanks again Wayland! Life's too darn short. Better be spent happy. Cheers, Sharon

Poet Tacito

Date: 5/17/2013 12:04:00 PM

In love, battles should be for each other. Not against. I dig this. Excellent work!

Lynn Dolly
Date: 6/1/2013 9:18:00 PM

Hello Drake! When it's not 50/50, needs to be let go. Thanks for stopping by. Cheers, Sharon

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/17/2013 3:58:00 AM

- You deserve the very best - such relationships will never go well - Sharon, a very well written poem. - Take care of yourself! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Lynn Dolly
Date: 5/17/2013 4:09:00 AM

Yes, i do! ;) We get what we accept, and sometimes it's really hard to step up the standard, but it's for the best. Thanks for your kind words and stopping by Anne-Lise. Cheers, Sharon

Yours Truly

Date: 5/17/2013 2:05:00 AM

Awesome portrayal of separation of two people's connection! I liked this one very much. Maybe you would give me the honor of reading some of my own with some feedback? Keep up the great work! -Yours Truly

Lynn Dolly
Date: 5/17/2013 4:10:00 AM

Thank you Yours Truly, and of course I'll stop by! Good Juju ;) Cheers, Sharon