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Galactic Love

Our love eternal an enduring infernal Thru galactic mist it shall always exist Our love undying magically mystifying How can I resist since you I’ve kissed Our love forever an endless endeavor Thru celestial skies our spirit never dies Our love in hell a fragile empty eggshell They will chastise within lamenting lies Our love reborn I shall obediently adorn Your ever presence a potent pleasance Our love Galactic with clusters climactic A floral fluorescence a lust luminescence. Aug.4.2017 MID AUGUST STANDARD CONTEST Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/17/2017 3:59:00 PM

A beautiful weaving of words!

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/15/2017 4:47:00 AM

I truly loved this write WW, a very good entry into the contest! My favorite line has to be, "Our love reborn I shall obediently adorn," a beautiful lime there! But the whole poem is quite gorgeous my friend! I really enjoyed reading your remarkable piece this morning, Great Work!!

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/14/2017 11:06:00 PM

WW, passionately penned, I absolutely love the last line! And that's saying a lot because each line sparkles with your romantic flair :) Good luck!

Maria Williams

Date: 8/14/2017 9:23:00 PM

Wow! WW my friend, this is such a romantic and expressive tribute. I loved the music and the seductive, unique and unusual imagery of the clip. All elements meld brilliantly in your arrangement - a definite FAVE from me and a worthy contest winner...My sincere compliments... Maria

Arturo Michael

Date: 8/14/2017 2:33:00 PM

Hi, WW. "Our love reborn I shall obediently adorn" Sounds nice. Have a lovely evening my dear one...

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/14/2017 12:39:00 PM

A beautiful tribute to love! Good luck for the contest.

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/14/2017 11:14:00 AM

Wow very nice WW. Good luck in the contest :)