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Galactic Love

Our love eternal an enduring infernal
Thru galactic mist it shall always exist
Our love undying magically mystifying
How can I resist since you I’ve kissed

Our love forever an endless endeavor
Thru celestial skies our spirit never dies
Our love in hell a fragile empty eggshell
They will chastise within lamenting lies

Our love reborn I shall obediently adorn
Your ever presence a potent pleasance
Our love Galactic with clusters climactic
A floral fluorescence a lust luminescence.




Aug.4.2017
MID AUGUST STANDARD CONTEST
Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Kim Rodrigues

August 17, 2017 at 3:59 PM

A beautiful weaving of words!

Russell Sivey

August 15, 2017 at 4:47 AM

I truly loved this write WW, a very good entry into the contest! My favorite line has to be, "Our love reborn I shall obediently adorn," a beautiful lime there! But the whole poem is quite gorgeous my friend! I really enjoyed reading your remarkable piece this morning, Great Work!!

Susan Ashley

August 14, 2017 at 11:06 PM

WW, passionately penned, I absolutely love the last line! And that's saying a lot because each line sparkles with your romantic flair :) Good luck!

Maria Williams

August 14, 2017 at 9:23 PM

Wow! WW my friend, this is such a romantic and expressive tribute. I loved the music and the seductive, unique and unusual imagery of the clip. All elements meld brilliantly in your arrangement - a definite FAVE from me and a worthy contest winner...My sincere compliments... Maria