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Premiere V- Open Contest of Rob Carmack... Submitted 16 Dec 2024
Beyond the skyline, I watch an expanse outside this earthly realm… torches of balls glitter in seamless motion, orange streaks rolling in random numbers, circling ' round their territory like crystal fibrils wheeling, darting, perhaps prancing… Yet in relays, heavenly bodies afar do not collide with one another each of them holding an alchemy where millions are unnamed, undefined, unattained. Pray tell, of what purpose do they rule through a mystery, perceived by human theories, not by an imprimatur of a Source's universal law? Prophets say it will take light years to touch their faces and claim residence within this galactic space ... but for now, mark it as a restricted passageway.

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Date: 12/17/2024 9:16:00 PM
What a deep write this is dear nette, i got hooked from the very first line and got lost within the descriptive lines so well articulated and written! You have a very unique way with words! Truly! Pleasure reading this
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Date: 12/17/2024 8:39:00 PM
Very profound Nette, and I congratulate you for knitting these mysteries all together. I Wish you and your family a Merry and Joyful Christmas filled with peace, laughter and most of all the gift of health. Hugs Maria
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Date: 12/17/2024 7:21:00 AM
Nette, this poem does indicate (and I think correctly so) that we will never understand what the universe is or what drives all the motion. The immense size of all that is out there does tend to isolate us from whatever is there. Hard to know just how unique our own planet is and if what we have here is somewhat duplicated somewhere. Smiles!!
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Date: 12/16/2024 7:05:00 PM
I think I read this posted before - but it doesn't mean it isn't great poetry, makes me feel a part of the Oneness of the Universe...and it's a pleasure always to read your work <3
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