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Galactic steel spaceship crashes
The event anticlimactic
A one-eyed alien dashes
Winding against wind apractic

From another galaxy pair
Heard that upon earth herds eat pears
In atactic state couldn't climb stairs
Swiftly did pray but was prey unwares

Behind a flower did lie man
The practic approach, his tactic
This alien to steal, game plan
Soon approach this galactic 

Fair were his few thoughts uncontrolled
Though alien thoughts were lactic
Since he hit the liquor steel, rolled
Moonshine did steal for extragalactic

On my Galaxy small, small  screen 
Right there did view their scary scenes
Do pray that these two do not glean
Offsprings to have mixed matched genes

Out of this world
Written: September 09, 2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/11/2017 7:07:00 PM
Oh, I HAD seen this one before, Sara!! Congrats for the win at least with Skat!!
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Date: 5/11/2017 2:59:00 PM
Sara, love it, love it, Congratulations :) SKAT
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Date: 9/23/2016 8:25:00 PM
great ending on this one with the line about the offsprings! This was that sci fi contest a while back? You were well inspired, Sara.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/26/2016 3:22:00 PM
I did enter this one in something but it did not place..Maybe pay back for not placing their poem at sometime..LOL Sara
Date: 9/23/2016 4:32:00 PM
A creative piece on space creatures. Nicely written. love phyl
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/26/2016 3:19:00 PM
Not usually into space things but this one just flowed.. Thanks for dropping by..Sara
Date: 9/16/2016 12:21:00 PM
Wow! Space creatures call for big long words. I got the drift though, Sara, and the green blob is wonderful. Love, daver
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/16/2016 4:20:00 PM
Thanks for the nice comment..I had to do some research to wright that one write..LOL..Sara
Date: 9/15/2016 8:26:00 PM
This poem was imaginative and so creative Sara. A great entry! : ) 7
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Date: 9/16/2016 4:21:00 PM
Imagination gone wild like that TV show..LOL.Sara Thanks for the visit to my page..
Date: 9/15/2016 4:16:00 PM
Lol! Thanks for sharing this intriguing gem.......A.M.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/15/2016 4:33:00 PM
Glad that you liked it..One of my better humorous ones..Sara
Date: 9/14/2016 1:36:00 AM
Very good rhyme...the incident comes clear to me like a humorous anecdote. Greetings for producing such a wonderful poem!!!
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Date: 9/10/2016 5:21:00 PM
Nice sci fi tale here! What does apractic mean? Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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