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gaining weight wonder why

feed me butter
give me pie
gaining weight?
I wonder why

Siting in a recliner
for one hour, now two
kicking off my instincts
Maybe three will do

Sitting sedentary
barely moving at all
bring me chocolate cake
and don’t make the piece that small!

Gaining weight my pretty?
Gee I wonder why.
I want another piece of rhubarb.
Don’t be so chintzy with that pie!

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Date: 6/12/2024 8:20:00 PM
love this!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 6/14/2024 8:26:00 PM
I loved writing it too so thank you

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